Love me in eons

ink showered a hail
of handsome words
on crumpled paper
love me in eons
rapid and slow
vast and intricate
let me luxuriate
in the rising heat
an unrepentant
benediction
of you.

Reviews

[Ardra]

an unrepentant
benediction
of you.

that sounds mmm hot ... :)
enjoyed reading this..

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Galadriel, I appreciate your visit.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

rapid and slow why i love my man thanks for sharing the poetry.

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Roxane

[Einstein Noodle]

ah the throes of love ... i love it! a very feel good poem for me....

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo for the lovely comment

[Einstein Noodle]

you are so welcome Ms. Hippy! :)

[emmajoy]

'.. an unrepentant ~ benediction ~ of you.'

Your words make love to love, dear Izzy. Beautiful.. memorable.. treasure.

[Island Hippy]

Awww ....YOU! aloha always xxx

[emmajoy]

Aloha you too, sweet mama. Beautiful words for a dreary night. xx

[barleygirl]

Nicely original & imaginative! I can feel the heat from here & I love the tangle of uncommon word choices! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Margie, much mahalo for your great review. Much appreciated. Izzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

'love me in eons', that single line stands alone in your write here, Izzy! 'an unrepentant benediction of you', I love this.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend, mahalo very much for your kind words x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Izzy. x

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Wonderful title for your tender, graceful, loving poem my ohana. Eloquent yet sensuous, flowing and rhythmic like the union of lovers, yet so much more...” love me in eons”yes, may God always bless your love...

[Island Hippy]

My ohana you make me feel like I know what I’m talking about ....haha. This feels a little different for me but I love the end result. Much mahalo Kalani and me kisses and aloha always xxx

[DiskartetHaraya]

The contrasting images meld into coherence. There is a sense of transcendence and breathlessness culminating into the last three lines.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, mahalo for leaving a lovely review. Much appreciated. Izzy

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A brief but poignant declaration of love that flows in adorable words and phrases Izzy.

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo John x