rain

quick little write about the weather

slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

Reviews

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

So emotional! you drew a really marvelous realistic picture there with 4 lines!
So immpressive!
Like it much!

[krish]

wannna u make it , it's all about a packet,
fly with a rocket, there'll be a socket,
if u had a control, then how u can make it,
this is a time to play the game...........bring-it.........

[krish]

rain .........rain.......now time to play the game.......

[Antonio Valentino]

i like the description of rain as silver, duh, i never thought about that before.. theres something comforting about being in a shelter when its raining outside.. like a tent or a cave or simply a house by the window, writing down how it inspires you..

very well done

Antonio

[nostal]

rain
rain
go
away
and
brush
the
lilacs
like
yes
no
i
will
have
retribution.
I am
Edward Norton,
and Daniel Day Lewis

[Ragin Cajun]

simply perfect!!!!

[Leigh]

beautiful in its simplicity

[BigBoyJohn]

Its great! Short and wonderous! :) Love it!

[krish]

nice...may be u should have to more elaborate it.....i meant continue it...

[Moon]

Beautiful ! I love the rain and your words give it a remarkable beauty that one can truely admire .