rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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I love the alliteration. Rain is a favorite subject for poets and this is a perfect offering for the reader interested in imagery. Excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


What a great cold piece of your artistry. I enjoyed the beauty of the poem. Very nice work... It's an adorable poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Simple and well composed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Looks like your already changing the world:) Great write:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ahhh I love this! I especially love the pitter patter! It's such a great sound! I have a poem called rain where I also use 'pitter patter'. This is lovely. Oh how I love the rain

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lolvely way to view rain, I like the way this is worded. It's...sweet. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Vile

7 Years Ago

Lovely** damn typos.
nicely done. It has a good flow. Bit short.

Posted 7 Years Ago


says it all

Pompous is good

No-one tells the RAIN what to do

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good use of imagination for descriptions on this. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 7, 2013
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K.
K.

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