I Don't Need A Wish

I Don't Need A Wish

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote about what happened when I was on a haunted hayride with my boyfriend at the time! Hope you like it! The hidden message is: Corrado's farm <3

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I Don't Need A Wish

Feel the chill in the air,
With your jacket on my back,
We're sitting in the back of haunted hayride,
Ready to get attacked,
Your hand holding onto mine,
To keep away my fright,
The crowd points to a shooting star,
But we can't see from where we are

I don't need a wish,
Cuz I already have you,
I don't need to dream,
Cuz they already came true,
I don't need anything more,
Cuz you're all I ever wanted,
Not even a shooting star,
Could be more beautiful than you are

People in awe,
Of what they just saw,
But not you and me,
Cuz we didn't get to see,
They say we can still make a wish,
I say not to tell me what it is,
You make me smile when I hear,
What you whisper in my ear

I don't need a wish,
Cuz I already have you,
We don't need to dream,
Cuz they already came true,
I don't need anything more,
Cuz you're all I ever wanted,
Not even a shooting star,
Could be more beautiful than you are

My heart still flips and flops,
And I never want it to stop,
I love that feeling that I feel,
When you tell me you love me,
And when the star comes around again,
I don't care that we didn't see

I don't need a wish,
Cuz I already have you,
I don't need to dream,
Cuz they already came true,
I don't need anything more,
Cuz you're all I ever wanted,
Not even a shooting star,
Could be more beautiful than you are

They say we can still make a wish,
I say not to tell me what it is,
You make me smile when I hear,
What you whisper in my ear <3

© 2013 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So I wrote this song about when my boyfriend took me to a haunted hayride at a place called Corrado's Farm. He made us sit in the back so that he could make fun of the people trying to scare us. It essentially just made it so that no one even tried to attack us... I was definitely grateful for that one! Then later, there was a shooting star, and we both missed it. The person running the hayride told us that we could still make a wish even though we missed it. So I asked him what he wished for, and he told me that he didn't need to wish for anything because he already had me. Yeah I was cheesy but it was still great haha! Then later, for some reason the star went in a circle and came back around, and yet we missed it again, but we didn't even care! :)

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another great song, my friend. keep up the good work and make sure to send me a copy of the album once it comes out :D lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

haha well thank you! :P will do! :)
I remember you telling me about thissssss :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

Haha yup :)
Ahhh, Krista I loved this one!!! This was sooo absolutely perfect and sweet!:) I think this is one of my favorites of yours so far!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Aww thanks! :)
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11 Years Ago

Np;)
I love the chorus-it shows how much your guy means to you :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! :) haha!
Well written. I went on a Haunted Hay Ride once. Believe me that was the last time I went on one the guy scared me so bad that from then on I refuse to go on one. Anyway, This was very good. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah it was pretty terrifying considering the fact that my boyfriend liked to harass the people.. read more
I love the message you've conveyed here within the text of a compelling write and read. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :)
Its really well written. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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