Departure

A few simple words
A kiss on the cheek
A heavy sigh

A quivering lip
The bravest of smiles
A tearful eye

A hug for a friend
A trembling hand
A wave goodbye


©️ 2022 Lathen Griffiths

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A short three stanza poem which has much impact. Farewells aren't easy, particularly if they are permanent. A poem here which tugs on the emotions and sends the mind into flight. We all remember the departures which hurt, yet some can be exciting and provide for new opportunities. So much said here in a little brevity.

Chris

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Chris

Lathen

[Ada]

This poem reminds me of how great full we should be for the simple pleasures in life; nothing more nothing less.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Nice to meet you Ada,

Regards

Lathen

[Gee]

On the 10/08/21 we had supper, 8 of us, round our dear friend Debs' house, as the evening ended we hugged her, kissed her cheek and wished her well with the chemo that was due to start on the 12th. On the 13th, my wife's birthday, Deb passed away.
This brought a tear to my eye :(

[Lathen Griffiths]

I’m very sorry to hear that Gee,

Kind regards,

Lathen

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it is really tough walking away, even knowing we did our best to console that friend, listen to that friend, advise that friend.
life is just not always a happy ending.
a moving write...
j.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Very true Jacob, thank you,

Lathen

[John the Baptist]

This one could describe any kind of serious parting, but for some reason it puts me in mind of spouses as one departs to go to war. The last line has a touch of finality to it.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you John.

[lightsong]

I think You do amazing job when it comes to these simple poems :> this is so strong, so effective. the photo is breathtaking for me. wonderfully done my friend.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Lightsong.

Best wishes

Lathen

[Coyote Poetry]

I do dislike goodbyes, I had too many. Hello Lathen and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lathen Griffiths]

They never get any easier that’s for sure, Many thanks Coyote,

Lathen.
read moreThey never get any easier that’s for sure, Many thanks Coyote,

Lathen.

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[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Lathen and you are welcome.

[Amber Stone]

this one is lovely, and epic one!
am glad you sharing this, L.G.
sincerely, Amber.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you for your kind words Amber,

Lathen

[Writergurl]

touching write here Lathen, enjoyed this

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Writergurl,

Lathen

[M. J. Smith]

Nicely written, Lathan. I can see a couple at the airport saying goodbye.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Cheers M.J.Smith

Lathen