Depths of Sunshine

Depths of Sunshine

A Poem by Laurierose
"

Yes, I've missed you; Welcome home.

"

We only have today to make them see.

So we shined;

I finally saw what was important

And that importance

 Made them blind.

 

Casually linger in my trail so I can memorize

Those steps.

 

Like sand-spun plankton, I’ll float away with you.

Though weightless, I felt the depths.

Wading through the great, big blue.

One could get lost searching the extent of my

Love for you.

© 2019 Laurierose


Author's Note

Laurierose
Whims of Moonlight; Depths of Sunshine.

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So beautiful dear poet.
"Like sand-spun plankton, I’ll float away with you.
Though weightless, I felt the depths.
Wading through the great, big blue.
One could get lost searching the extent of my
Love for you."
The above lines. Good to get lost in the emotion of love. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

3 Months Ago

I enjoy reading your thoughts on my writes. Thank you for the kind review!
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome Laurierose.



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Rye
I so loved this line here "Like sand-spun plankton, I’ll float away with you."
This is so very good

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

1 Month Ago

There's so much beauty in the oceanic gaze. Thank you for the touching review!
buzzing bunny brain i don't know about his steps but I liked following your loving stroll of discovery one can only feel what a lucky fellow this one of whom you adore from reading this!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

2 Months Ago

"What a feeling in my soul. Love burns brighter than sunshine." -Aqualung

I drew mos.. read more
The first verse feels a little mysterious, referring to something that can't be known or imagined by me. It feels like a lead-in to the rest of the poem, which really sparkles with fresh uninhibited writing. I won't repeat Coyote (review below), but these lines are so imaginative & well-crafted! The ocean is a great metaphor for feelings that feel like infinity (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

3 Months Ago

Love how the closing lines really spoke to you. I definitely wanted to re-create the dizzying feelin.. read more
Those closing lines really do elevate the feeling of something so expanse as the love you describe here... truly tangible. Great writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

3 Months Ago

Your words truly made my day :) Thank you for the awesome comments.
So beautiful dear poet.
"Like sand-spun plankton, I’ll float away with you.
Though weightless, I felt the depths.
Wading through the great, big blue.
One could get lost searching the extent of my
Love for you."
The above lines. Good to get lost in the emotion of love. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

3 Months Ago

I enjoy reading your thoughts on my writes. Thank you for the kind review!
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome Laurierose.
and depths of love expressed..Love how you made "plankton" sound romantic...not easy to do.
sometimes few people will see the worth of another...but that is priceless...and others could go broke being so blind.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

3 Months Ago

I agree. So few know the beauty of what's naturally around. It becomes stale figures in life not wor.. read more

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Laurierose

Durham, NC



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