Ballroom Bliss

Ballroom Bliss

A Poem by Blue Moon Ice Cream
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An old-fashioned dance

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Dancing, whirling
Smiling, turning
Crisp, black heels click on polished oak
Warm eyes and steady hands
Waltzing, drifting
Smooth melody from harmonious violin strings
Rainbow gowns twirl
Elegant curls bounce
Transported from ballroom to pearly skies
By a rush of sweeping sound
Viva la vida

© 2011 Blue Moon Ice Cream


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nicely written

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you have captured a moment so beautifully in a very unique way. I really love this poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really liked this, i love the image u give, the title is great and fitting and i love the picture as well

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like the imagery you paint in this lovely scene, although as a 'poem' I'm not getting it, really...I enjoyed it though! :)x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this, and I loved the imagery, you did a really good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its...its...its...ballroom blitz...

Oh, wrong title...but still this poem rocks for sure.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the imagey in this poem and you made seem like such a happy event! Great write! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago



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