Experience

Experience

A Poem by Luke L

My visions I transmit
Capture them enough to stimulate
Yet not enough to stifle your imagination

My head opens wide
Spills the content of senses
Into your skull
That I split open like a cantaloupe

Experience through my perception
Live vicariously
Experience your own senses

As you become me
The antagonistic protagonist

© 2013 Luke L


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Imagery is good
I like your powerful self perception


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

10 Years Ago

thank you, Amanda :)
AmandaN

10 Years Ago

Thank you !
Nicely done...Poignant and coyly cryptic. A lovely read. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Outstanding, in your use of insightful imagery, unique, with amazing flow.
Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

10 Years Ago

thank you very much, miss :)
Amazing piece. Altered, shared, and mixed perceptions. What's what? Brilliant.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luke L

10 Years Ago

I was writing about what ones tries to do with writing or several forms of art really.

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Luke L
Luke L

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



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I love music. I love writing erotic stories and poems. Follow me on Twitter: @LukeLesterMusic Here is my blog: http://luketalkstuff.blogspot.ca/ I write random things on there and link .. more..

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