Fibro Curse

Fibro Curse

A Poem by Lyndsay Castro
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An ode to fibromyalgia

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Pain, pain, go away

Come again another day.

The blinding fire burns my bones

My brain and eyelids made of stone.

You will not let me play today

I hope you won't live on, I pray.

You make me wish I wasn't here

You shove my throat full of fear.

I cannot stay awake for life

And no one knows my painful plight.

 

 

 

 

copywrite 2008 Lyndsay Castro

© 2008 Lyndsay Castro


Author's Note

Lyndsay Castro
I am in a lot of pain today.

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Nice write - my prayers are with you. Not an easy situation to deal with.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You and I both relate, Great poem

Orlando M

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great title ... great poem , sorry it had to come from sore bones :(



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG!!I just got the chills when i read that!!! i can almost feel your pain... i'm sooo sorry i will pray for you to get better.....REALY REALLY GOOD WRITE....KEEP WRITING!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww I'm sorry about the pain!
This is an amazing ode!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry that you're in pain. I have a friend with fibro and know how horrible it can be. The poem is great though...drawing good from bad; I like your style!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow

i love it

i feel the pain by reading that.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome write..
I've totally been there and it truly is painful...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You poem speaks of your pain, I wish I could help, please take care of yourself. Prayers to you. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWWW, i hope you feel better.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lyndsay Castro

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