You Think It's Easy!?

You Think It's Easy!?

A Poem by Manda
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She is upset because he thinks its easy. He doesn't realize how hard it is to say goodbye or how much it hurts. All she wanted was to be happy and for him to be there for her. But he never was... He never knew about the tears she cried... He didn't know a

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You think its easy
Being broken
Never knowing where we are
Or where we stand
Always fighting
Never knowing the truth
Our world  full of lies
I cant ever be happy
Because you're never there
You don’t listen to me
You just argue
I don’t matter to you
Guess I never did
You hurt me
And made me cry
And that’s why I'm broken…
 

© 2009 Manda


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Excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww thats so sad. I like this poem very much but I think you could enhance your word choice to make the flow and effect stronger. Very well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can really feel the emotion penned in this one.
I have been there. Well expressed!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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