The Sunset

The Sunset

A Poem by Manda
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A scenery of a magnificent sunset. As they watch the colors paint the night sky. Bringing life to our world. Ending the day with beauty

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The sun sets

And the colors begin to appear


A radiant yellow, orange and red

The colors paint the night sky


The sky warm

And shining joyfully


Its like a ball of fire

You can feel the heat of the earth on you


As you walk across the beach

You hear the waves crashing onto the shore


As the sun sets

Farther across the horizon


The earth starts to cool

And the wind starts to blow


The sky starts to darken

The colors slowly fading away


As for the sun...

It becomes dark


The earth becomes silent

And goes into a deep sleep....

© 2010 Manda


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FINALLY. After all the sorrowful poems I was reading while sifting through my read requests, I come upon a happy one. My mind is at rest. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so beautiful and relaxing to read.
Listening to screamo and reading this?
Not possible, I had to turn it off.

Beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this ... so much

Posted 11 Years Ago


I loved this a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this. Sometimes I don't like nature poems, but this one was interesting. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It was great. However, I felt that most of the stanzas sounded like they should have been finished with something else. Maybe I was reading it wrong, but that's just how it felt to me. It was still an amazing poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love nature poems. I think this is a great nature poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful piece. It is the talent of a good writer to be able to actually take something we see and make the reader see it when he/she reads our work.

Word choice is well done, and the colors you've portrayed are excellent. Nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading this awe inspiring portrait of nature.
This beautiful poem is quite relaxing. Great work capturing
the emotions of it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You paint a very beautiful picture with your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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