You Dont Care

You Dont Care

A Poem by Manda
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He just left her. Left her there all alone with nowhere else to go. She was afraid... She had nothing left of him because he took everything. And he didnt give a damn

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Fine just leave

What do you care

You dont care if I cry

Or how much pain I am in

You dont care if you break my f*****g heart

You just dont care

I am so sad now that your gone

I loved you with all my heart

But then you had to leave me here

All alone

Feeling all this fear

I am so damn cold...

There is nothing for me to hold

I have nothing left to hold on to

Not even the memories of you

Because you took them with you

When you left me here...

I wish you cared

I wish you would come back

And save me from all this misery

I dont like being here all alone

Its so dark, and cold

I have no where else to go

But here...

This is where you left me

Where you let me fall...

And this is where I would stay

Because you dont care where I am

And I hate you because you just dont give a damn

© 2009 Manda


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Wow. This says it all. I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such an emotional write here,
Sad and expressed well!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sad again, but with more anger this time.
I like it.
Very well done, the flow is excellent!
"And I hate you because you just dont give a damn" I can relate to that!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite a raw capturing of the emotion. And I suppose that this one is straight from the heart.
Heartbreak, love for a person turned to disgust. Sometimes people do what we least expect of them, and it's shocking, hurtful, and shattering all at once.



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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