On The Run

She runs all over the guys. Shes a w***e reading to hit the spot! Better watch yourself!

Oh God
That B***h
Is On The Run
Again

She's Hot
And Loves
To Hit
The Spot

You Better
Call The Cops
Before It's Too Late
And You Take The Bait

Her Long Blonde Hair
And Big Green Eyes
Will Make You Want To Die
Because She Is So Damn Fine

Oh God
Here That B***h Comes
So You Better Run
For You're Her Next One

Author's Note

I don't know... something different I guess.

Reviews

[kbjami]

I'm guessing it's about how maybe some guys get distracted by beauty and not actually notice how awful the person is. Like it says how "you better run" for maybe I think it's saying run from her deceitful ways. This really reminds me of this quote "There are two kinds of light - the glow that illumines, and the glare that obscures" (James Thurber).

[Chloe Christine]

what I get from this is,
a girl who gets whatever, no whoever she wants,
with her looks. because she's a w***e..
hm, i love it. :)

[heich]

love it..

[Devons]

I like this. I think it implies alot more than it says. The woman; the predator that's lurking somewhere, it seems to be saying ("that b***h!") is a danger to others' love, and she is feared by the innocent girls upon whose loves she may swoop! And it also is a warning to the potential victim that she is bad and not all she may seem...

[Jason]

I love it...love the theme, love the flow, and love the story. Ironically, maybe one wants to be her next one....whether knowing or not....? Excellent work.

[SamBug]

very good.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Yep, definitely a bit different. But I like to see you write outside your comfort zone. This might not be something you would normally write, but it is written with the same skill you normally exhibit. Well done!!!

[Wicahpi]

LoL I know some women like this :)

[*Kantola*]

It is INDEED something different.
"Her Long Blonde Hair
And Big Green Eyes"
That really jumped out at me. I think it's only because i have green eyes and blonde hair. (That was almost typed "green hair and blonde eyes" LOL, i love you, morning dyslexia!)
Great job with this one! It was different, but something nice for a change :)

[aftervision]

thanks for the poetic warning -- lol this is wonderful poet

[Indigo Ribbon]

Great Poem! :-) The only advice I would say is to stay away from cliche rhymes. (Late and Bait) Other than that, good work :-)