On The Run

She runs all over the guys. Shes a w***e reading to hit the spot! Better watch yourself!

Oh God
That B***h
Is On The Run
Again

She's Hot
And Loves
To Hit
The Spot

You Better
Call The Cops
Before It's Too Late
And You Take The Bait

Her Long Blonde Hair
And Big Green Eyes
Will Make You Want To Die
Because She Is So Damn Fine

Oh God
Here That B***h Comes
So You Better Run
For You're Her Next One

Author's Note

I don't know... something different I guess.

Reviews

[kbjami]

I'm guessing it's about how maybe some guys get distracted by beauty and not actually notice how awful the person is. Like it says how "you better run" for maybe I think it's saying run from her deceitful ways. This really reminds me of this quote "There are two kinds of light - the glow that illumines, and the glare that obscures" (James Thurber).

[Manda.Ree]

yeh definitely different but a good different..

[JOSEPH SILVESTRO]

Beauty is a snare. Its a glow that blinds from the eternal spark within; some light, some dark. Good modern poetry.

[Vartan Haghverdi]

I'm going to have to agree with kbjami here. The poem reminds me of a couple of girls in particular. Run boys, RUN!

[Star Wolf]

Better run and fast! I like this here poem.

[Tina Kline]

I like this. She's not so nice as far as guys are concerned but guys aren't so nice to gals all the time either.

[Emily Paige]

it's good very different.

[Myk Malice]

i want her to catch me, i like it.

[GunMetal]

She's like a bug zapper to a fly, lol. Fun write.

[Haifa]

lol, good poem

I needed this one about six months ago! Why didn't you warn me? LOL great poem