I have been trying to write something but I have failed miserably, this is my attempt after a long time.
This one is inspired from the song Fear of Blank Planet - Porcupine Tree.
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Hey,
It feels fast paced, irritated, (in a good way), urgent, and the last 2 lines wraps it up really nicely. That's such an interesting statement: with innui died significance. And thanks for teaching me a new word today! Haha (still don't know how to pronounce it). Cool poem!
It's not just the words...not just the meaning..not the rap that flows through it..but i feel its the integral sum of all these...to be honest, they inspired me a lot..and I owe my gratitude to you.
I love this poem! The rhymes and the short structure are genius, I also like the meaning of your poem and how it so accurately reflects today's world. :)
I like the harsh tone your words made me read this in. The society we are living under is crumbling slowly and one small voice sadly cannot make a drastic impact. Love it!
Do you know, if you read this poem out loud in rap style but with a really fed up voice, it makes a tremendous impact! You really must write some more. It is amazing where inspiration comes from.