True Feelings.

True Feelings.

A Poem by MetBySunlight




His eyes; blues and whites
Lips parted; rose-pink
Arms humble, butterflies awoken
Hands sturdy but gentle, soft against my arm
Stopping just to catch a breath,
He took my breath away
And makes it easier for me-
Talk; carelessly
Like nothing else matters
But that's the truth,
Because nothing else matters when he's around.


'Cause like the sun kisses the leaves
In an early Spring breeze,
I need to talk to him everyday
He brought colour to my,
Black and white world
He brought light to my,
Darkened world.


Without him I am lost...

Seeing him with her is a pest
Her straight, soft blonde hair
Legs; long and tan
I'm just a pale brunette
Whatever could he see in me?


Words; kindly spoken on his half
Tear me down, ripping me apart
Clueless he is,

Who does not know my true feelings.


His words are like knives,
Small, tame in good hands
But truly strong; sharp; penetrating; murder
Talking about her; never ending
His words cut like torture
When he claimed he loves her!


No, she may not admit
She's known to second-glance,
She doesn't love him back.


The truth comes out,
Faster than ever before
He met a new girl
She claims to love him,
... But I love him too.


... I always will...




MetBySunlight. (:

© 2011 MetBySunlight

Author's Note

Not my best, I don't really like this one but thought I'd post it anyway :P

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Emotional and heartfelt write. Nicely done! I enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I really liked this poem. I can relate to this. This is ver well writen with great, sad, almost hopeful emotions. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow, I love this! Enjoyed every line! This is one poem I won't soon forget; it's very inspiring. Thank you for sharing. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago

The expression is for communicating how you feel, and you do that well in this piece. That's the whole idea, right? Everything is clearly put, no metaphors needed in this case, yet the sun, the leaves, the breeze all flow into this well --thanks for sharing this. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Uhmm this is really good I think its ONe Of Your Best I was intrigued and loved evbery word

Posted 12 Years Ago

The poem is very good. The description gave life to the poem. You could feel the desire and sadness in every line. I like the beginning. Hard to describe people. You did a very good job describing the characters in the poem. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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7 Reviews
Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 8, 2011
Tags: Love, Teenager, Hate, Eyes, Blue, Lips, Butterflies, Breath, Talk, Truth, Sun, Kisses, World, Spring, Light, Colour, Lost, Words, Spoken, Torn, Clueless, Knies, Torture, Admit, She, Him, I, Ever, Fast

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