Grayson, and Candy.

This poem is dedicated to my little 4th cousin Grayson. He's from Virginia. I love him to pieces.<3

'Round and 'round here we go hiding the treasures
up in the tree tapped to a string,
just so we can torture you.
Soon, oh soon, you'll grow as old as me
but please don't hurry fast.
Being young is fun.
Remembering the times where I was going
after those eggs, why can't that be me anymore?
Helping you race fast to get the eggs
not paying attention to the high ones,
there were too many so we scattered them in a line
who will get to them first?
You silly boy, you started quickly getting the eggs
missing your basket.
Just standing there laughing,
you are such a cutie.
You tell me you're almost six,
how can that be? I remember you just as
a tiny baby boy.
You can't carry your bag no more,
it's too heavy. Why don't you save some
for the others?
You won't listen to me,
oh goodness,
I remember being just as suborned
as you, soon you'll wanna let the others
have the same fun as you have.
There comes a time in life where you can
be the person having fun, and then creating the fun.
It's a blast making the fun for you. 

Author's Note

Well yeah, this is to Gray...he's so cute. I just love his bundle of fun. I wish I had a picture of him<3

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

a lot of fun here...but also you might want to change TAPPED into TAPED...and spell STUBBORN..not SUBORNED....a very lively and uplifting poem nonetheless..thanks

[Chris]

You don't always know what will bring a smile until it's suddenly just there. This is one of "those". Ya got heart.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is so cute!

[R J Askew]

This is achingly beautiful. I am actually listening to marilyn manson 'Sweet Dreams'. I cld not help thinking that we, we high ones are just the same as your little one. Here we are on our little planet spinning around our sun. Yet what do we really know about the why of it all. Are we not as tiny children in the things we just do knot know. But there is a beauty in this childish not knowing, an innocence to us however high we might think outselves in our little lives. I know I read your poem in a different way to the way you wrote it, but I most certainly enjoyed it as it made me think and feel very small.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

love the poem, it really brings out Grayson a lot, I have a little sister who is just like that. they grow up so fast, don't they.

[Becky Clancy]

So cute :3

[MandaBear]

Very cute!!

[Captain]

Very cute, some gramatical errors, but very nice regardless :)
'Captain

[SuicidePact.]

You are a fantastic writer!!

wow, like I can't find fault, the words spoke to me, and i believe you wrote this from the heart!

well done