After ''later''

After ''later''

A Poem by Ana B.

Should I stay awake in this dream

While the thinkers harvest the Wind of Fate...

This rain of tears I feel within

Slowly feeds the ocean of this untold wait.


Mind phantoms are baffling this affair.

Me - still haven’t found the color of my breath...

Lonely hands trying to sculpt some air,

Made a beautiful castle, yet, closer to death.


And now I’m starting to miss

The dream I didn't  get to dream.







© 2019 Ana B.


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Ana B.

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This is a series of increasingly enigmatic lines that, when read all at once, kinda hurt my brain.

English isn't even your primary language. It's unfair that you can do this and I can't.

You're a criminally underrated writer on this site.




Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Ana B.

3 Weeks Ago

Observant. It's funny how thoughts are different depending on the language you think them in. It can.. read more
David george

3 Weeks Ago

Ha... personality disorder. I think most people who think for themselves will always seem to have a.. read more
Ana B.

3 Weeks Ago

haha, you're not wrong.Maybe people as an individual are somewhat perspicacious, if they put the ani.. read more
There a re times when fl ying skyward seems to be sole com panion when sleeping. But, then comes the waking, wanting renewal, per haps.. but find ing need is worse.. perhaps sliding away.

Beautif ully expressed as ever is, but, oh so s ad. So hope that starligh t treats you better sooner than s oon. Hugs

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Got caught up in the melancholy's dance of words...Thank you for the thoughtful review my dear ;) .. read more
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Am here if ever .. .. ..
This is a very well written write. I liked and enjoyed this

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Thank you :))
m3lody mae

2 Months Ago

not a problem
This is an exquisite write..

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Thank you David.
feels like someone who knows they are fated to die soon, maybe of disease....the second stanza just blew me away...so beautiful...
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

It does feel that way....
Thank you very much Jacob :)

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