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I

Used

To

 Look

 For

  Rainbows

 

In

 Those

 Tears

 As

 They

 Fell

 

Into

 That

 Tiny

 Saline

 Reservoir

 

Of

 Your

 Navel

 I

 Once

 Knew

 So

 Very

Well

 

I

  Also

 Searched

 For

 Secrets

Hidden

 In

 Your

 Eyes

 

And

Those

 Tucked

 Behind

 That

 Mirror

 I

 Have

 Since

 Grown

 To

 Despise

 

     

 

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Wow. I don't know what I was expecting when I stumbled across this piece, but this throws my expectations entirely away. This for sure exceeded them, and it's rare I found a piece that feels like something I would attempt to write. This is so, so, gorgeous and beautiful and I just love the whole thing. (:

[Neville]

How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some reason, your words of encouragement failed to trigger the usual notification ... Many thanks and All Good Things,

Neville ...

Oh' and do keep writing .. I shall visit your posts very soon :)

[Vertigo Cat1111]

It's no problem! It happens at times. (:

[Neville]

I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people have notified the administrator .. we shall have to see whether these glitches improve .......... N

[Neon]

What a touchable poem, it's touched my heart. I liked the words.

[Neville]

I am touched, thanks, N

[Sami Khalil]

"I

Used

To

Look

For

Rainbows



In

Those

Tears

As

They

Fell "

This poem is soooo romantic although a bit sad. The form too is outstanding...:)
AGT

[Neville]

Cheers Sami,

Yeah, AGT's N

[Sami Khalil]

Cheers...AGT
You are welcome...:)...........