Over & Out

just words...

Over & Out

 

It’s over

But you know that

Don’t you

It’s crazy

And I know it

Don’t ya

We just flew

Too fast and blew it

You and me

 

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Sometimes,we just fly too close to the sun and get burnt, or swoop too low to the ground snd end up eating pavement. Either way hurts.
I have said it before, but its worth repeating... How the hell did this dating lark ever catch on? Maybe a truthful advertising slogan could sort us out. Love, guarenteed to f**k you up or your money back!
My sympathies.

[Neville]

smiling here but still spitting out sidewalk... cheers

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometimes we can move too fast. Forget the good parts. If I could go back in time. More trips to wine tasting and to discover ancient and beautiful places with a love. Your words, honest, direct and true. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

am so glad you stopped by Johnnie C.. and if I could join ya on one or two of them wine tastings, what a laugh we could have.. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

"speed kills" i have read ;{ and to look back on such a blazing romance and admit one just "blew it" is so tragic ... nice minimalist capsule of crazy flames ... totally relatable my friend!
E.

[Neville]

you got this geezer encapsulated in a capsule of fire retardant crazy foam... the fact you can relate fuels my glow.... :) cheers bro.. N

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................

[Neville]

me too... Happy New Year to ya and true x

[Chris Shaw]

Your title makes me think of a message being given over the air waves. Carried in the ether. Sometimes it just doesn't work out, it happens. It can be painful but more painful if you don't accept it. This is a declaration, a final declaration. That's how I am reading you Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

precisely.. well almost.. maybe.. thank you our Chris.. sometimes, it just aint gonna work, is it... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Precisely, well almost.. maybe.. you have left what I call plenty of wriggle room there :)

[Neville]

neat innit... thanks again our Chris x

[Chris Shaw]

Neat it is Neville. There you go, I've spiced my answer with some alliteration, just for you :)

[Neville]

........:)

[Cherrie Palmer]

I see your cheeky wit is at it again. I like the quick pace of this. Your title could be the name of the next dating web sight. All dates held at Murphy's Law and Lounge.

[Neville]

Ha... you got me smiling here Cherrie.. bless ya my friend.. I wonder if any one would sign up.... :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol well you can be founder and 1st member. The rest is up to fate and or advertising.

[Neville]

that's the story of my life.... :) N