She Loves You

just messin with words and a tune... and I don't mean one o them cherry menthol things grandma used to make me suck..

She Loves You

 

She loves you

Yeah yeah yeah

But she’s

As awkward

As a beetle

On its back

Avoiding every

Paving slab

That might as well

Be cracked

Yeah yeah yeah

 

She say’s she

Loves you

Yeah yeah yeah

She’s scarred

She’s scared

She’s everywhere

A victim of

Her own design

The record

Just got stuck

Yeah yeah yeah

 

Yeah she loves you

And you know

That can’t be bad

But she self inflicts

And licks her lips

Although is never

For the taking

Yeah yeah yeah

Take it from me

She is her own

Worst enemy

Yeah yeah yeah

 

She say’s 

She

Loves you

But she’s

As awkward

As a beetle

On its back

Avoiding every

Paving slab

That might as well

Be cracked

Yeah yeah yeah yeah

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

hum along if ya feel like it yeah yeah yeah yeah

Reviews

[lightsong]

Well first on my defense we are all a bit of awkward aren't we?! second oh yeah.. yeah yeah, somehow Your song sticks in the mind and becomes addicted! maybe because I was thinking of bugs and bees while reading this? You know the bug surely loves us! and You know many men call their garrulous women "bugs" lol lol lol Neville my friend Your poem makes me chuckle for more than one reason.

[Neville]

I am learning something new almost every day.. The Girl G is a good teacher.. Many heartfelt thank you's my lovely friend.. I hope you have been well since we last hooked up... :)

[lightsong]

Thanks to Your "yeah yeah yeah yeah" song, I've been smiling since ;)

[barleygirl]

This is one of the best things I've read by you so far! Wow! This is banging on all cylinders! Powerful rhyme & rhythm & pacing & musicality! I love the msg! I love how you present the awkward, oft-unlovable aspects of a person as being the strong points in one's favor. I would fall in love with an orangutan if that's who your poem referred to *wink! wink!* (((DRUGS))) -- September = harvest time in California (recreationly legal!) . . . fondly & fuzzily, Margie

[Neville]

Thank you for enjoying the stopover and taking full advantage of me my dear friend... (TOKES) munchily :) Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Love the Beatles and She Loves You takes me back to a very happy place. Your lyrics made me smile. This dame doesn't seem to ring your bell much. All women can be awkward and most men can be bloody impossible. That's the negatives out the way while I linger in the positives. Good morning Neville on a rare Friday 13th with a full moon thrown in for added measure.

Chris

[Neville]

Yes, they were kinda good weren't they .. Friday 13th eh.. that figures. Good mane & thank you for visiting these words.

Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the movement of words and thoughts. A fun poem to read Neville. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

thank you for visiting Coyote, ever welcome.

N.

[Coyote Poetry]

Always a pleasure to read your work. 8 days of work, two day off. Maybe can read and write. You are welcome Neville.

[Neville]

cheers my busy friend..

[Lorry]

Can't live with 'em, not allowed to kill them.... So every woman I have known in an intimate and squidgy way keep telling me.
Like British and Americans, men and women are also separated by a common language. Like hopscotch, we stare in bewilderment and question mark eyebrows, wondering what they mean, forgetting that the reason we don't understand is because we quite wrong lyrics think anything they have ever said is a conversation that has ended. Will we ever learn?
No! But I do expect a hash tag any minute now 😀

[Neville]

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There, now.. you've been framed.. hash tag indeed :)
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[Neville]

Cheers n all squire

[Lorry]

Welcome 😀

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Great one here, Neville.
I just fell in love with with this piece.
It leads me down the lines humming.
Enjoyable and beautiful with interesting cover page.

[Neville]

cheers n all that jazz my friend..... very kind and much appreciated.. N