let go

now..

Spiraling away,
Things you can catch by the hand
I have waited far too long
The river's proof.


© Nothing Personal. February 27, 2011.

Reviews

[Moflo]

Nice and simple. I liked it, very vivid in its descriptions too.

[Tate Morgan]

I was feeling the need to let go today of a good friend who is lost But I will wait to see if she feels the same

[c.m.]

Thought provoking piece of magic.

[Emily B]

this is wonderful!

[QC]

Your poems always get me thinking. Fantastic.

[OT]

ah very nice! the ambiguity lets us all speculate based on our own thoughts! nice!

[Robin]

the now and regret ...

[Kerry O'Connor]

Such an enigmatic piece...leaves the reader speculating, spiralling, washed away...

[Lilly Negoi]

ohhh, living the present...not so easy to do all the time...