eyes

looking at them

The madness in their eyes
is intoxicating.
The magic in your eyes
is plain sad.
Together we are
mad, thus;
But you are
the swish
of God's wand.

© Nothing Personal. February 9, 2011.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is an enchantment to your words, looking deep within those eyes to see what lies inside. Powerful expressions.

[.]

. ah, what a magical and mesmerizing and moving swish ...

[Jessica Harmony]

i love eyes they help you see! :P this is a cute little poem ;)

[CompellingComposer]

There seems to be some kind of humor in this, but it's really good. Somewhat like a fantasy. I like it.

[.]

LOL..something funny and magical about this..

[Geralyn Miller]

How amazing and well executed, a lovely and magical thought encompassed in a work of word art.

[Jeff]

Great work on this one.

[SpokenWord]

I like the last line as well, it shows God as a Master artist and her eyes to be a work of beauty.

[OT]

ahh profundity in simplicity for sure!! well written NP - your experiments with smaller poems is definitely paying off!! "the swish of God's wand" - nice!