You

Hello my someone

Hello my you

She is snuggled in her gold bed

Thinking of you

You

You

You are her favorite thought

Her sunshine and warmth

She thinks of your eyes

Your sweet sweet words

How your body will curl up with hers

Have you ever had a heart hug?

Do you remember the very beginning?

The beginning of it all in the fall?

If she could go back she would

She would've said more

She would repeat that day if she could

The sheets of rain coming down

The first cold

The dread and the frown

Her laptop crashing to the ground

In the blink of an eye

It all turned around

Hello you!

You made winter warmer

The brutal cold was taken away

Music kept her alive

and in the spring you devoured her mind

In the summer you smoldered

Now it is fall again

Here she is

Here you are

1 year of it all

She thinks of you

You and your clothes

Her dress and the joy

  Laughter and humor

Hindsight and dreams

Spring flowers and cups of tea

Green white and gold will meet red white and blue

Are you ready for this?

Are you?  

Are you ready to shout?

You shouldn't worry

She'll like you for you

You are she and she is you

And before she leaves

Before she goes flying away

Before boarding the jet

She will love you

you

you

just you

You

Reviews

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Pretty great writing. I have nothing to say, excepct that this was beautifully written.

[Inject Positivity]

Wonderful.....You are so much talented.....I hope you keep writing like this.....

[dan]

Kathryn, Such a profound expression of love, spanning four seasons. (I got a kick out of the first season mentioned being fall...so many large and vivid things in the course of MY life have happened in the fall for some unknown reason. So this grabbed my attention in a flash.) So many expressions of this robust love, which will eventually be put aside when one hops an airplane flight...getaway?...illustrate a love so deep that it is hoped by the reader that some sort of divine long-distance love will blossom and grow...forever. Just a wonderful write, Kathryn, this is being saved in my library favorites. Thank you for THAT! take care...dan

[AaronFreitas]

I love the thoughts in this write. Made me wish someone thinks of me in this way someday soon! haha nice work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again.
"She thinks of you
You and your clothes
Her dress and the joy
Laughter and humor
Hindsight and dreams
Spring flowers and cups of tea "
The above lines were my favorite. Create place, flowers and a cup of tea. A perfect place. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks Friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Robert]

Kathryn, this was a very heart telling and touching piece. I believe written very well and the structure you displayed and the word choice was stellar. You showed in this piece the love that you have for this person but also the sense of loss and regret. An emotional piece be proud of this piece that you have written.

[Kathryn Smith]

Thank you Robert! I appreciate the feedback! Have a lovely day. :) I'm proud of this piece for sure!