Butterfly eyes

Butterfly eyes

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Shades of azure and green... a reflection from the sea... gaze across the billowing waves to glorious days of pleasure-filled moments wild and carefree...

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The wind swept me into your arms where the sea 
and land met in a cove of mystery and love... 
as the scent of roses filled the air with an 
aphrodisiac of apricot liquor pouring from 
a fountain borne of ancient stolen moments... 

The sunset in golden and burgundy shades of 
passionate delight filled the night with notions 
of Arabian nights and fruit of forbidden 
appetite became the dreams of lovers as 
angels played music from a far off galaxy... 

Peace was as lovely as a thunder cloud filled with 
beauty and celebration of ancient lore... 
as the tide went out to explore the unknown 
mysteries of the sea bringing treasure fit 
for a King and Queen who once ruled the Sea...  

© 2016 Patricia Wedel


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Your poem has a way of representing the journey of being swept up by affection or sex or even food or other pleasures! You start with visions by the sea, then the journey takes off like a magic carpet ride thru a variety of landscapes & sensations, well-crafted for all the senses. Then this journey slowly returns to the original location by the sea with grand & dynamic descriptions that could be felt as the climax of whatever journey one has been on! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dearest Margie... your perception always amazes me. I feel as though you have journey to the Sea an.. read more



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Mysterious images of romance through the ages. The sea is always a setting for seduction. You touch on all the senses with your vivid imagery. A splendiferously romantic write, my friend. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Lydia, to receive a beautiful review from the
First Lady of Romance is indeed as lovely.. read more
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Pat.
Excellent work... especially this part

Peace was as lovely as a thunder cloud filled with
beauty and celebration of ancient lore...
as the tide went out to explore the unknown

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Dale, thunder is a quiet rendition of
romance at sea... a lullaby for lovers in
.. read more
May your nights be wild and carefree as the sea...
as dreams become a fantasy of stolen moments...
truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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