Honey Bee my Valentine

Honey Bee my Valentine

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
"

Your sting is sweet and inviting...

"
February has Honey Bees with lists of orders  

from Lovers who know that the sweetness of 

lasting love can only come from a honeycomb... 

There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard 

wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and 

endearing words of amour for girls in the 

latest style with hair held up with butterflies 

with colored ribbons and red hearts... 

Bee Mine Sweetheart.  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Reading this, I felt like I was being swarmed by a buzzing plethora of sensations & I love the contrasts in your topsy-turvy message of stinging attraction. This is the height of uninhibited rambling, using whatever unexpected imagery tumbles out, not being overly fussy about the order & arrangement of words which can take the spunk out of a msg. You've captured the lovely messy stinging pleasure & pain that love almost always is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

that might be why it is so expensive to get now...
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Aha! You are a regular sleuth! Thanks for the info & since you've got so much time on your hands, it.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

ah do i wish i had so much time on my hands...ha ha..

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Awwww, such a sweet write. I can see butterflies artfully placed in a lovely hairdo and hear bees buzzing about in bouquets meant for sweethearts. Lovely imagery, Pat. Lydi***

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

I can picture you with those butterflies in your hair, my friend. You are a free spirit!
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Hi Lydi... I bought the Butterfly clips with strands of colored hair at Claire’s boutique for my g.. read more
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

I am a poet and an 👩‍🎨 artist ... Amen
You really are a sweetheart, Pat! It's poets like you who keep the cafe moving in the way it should! Your words are kind and charming.. and most of all bring smiles to me and undoubtedly others. Just did what I normal would not, that is to read Margie's review. Intrigued to read about Sting from both of you.. cos could I please raise my hand - love Fields of Gold.

Dear friend, many thanks for your special gift. Please spread it around like the first class pollinator you are. Hugs. xx

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Em... I will always be a Humble 🐝 Bee. So many talented well bred and well read poets to ke.. read more
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Sending you hugs and Lady Bugs ... Pat
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Caught and .... much appreciated, petal!

You got some extraordinary imagery in this post.. one can not read the words without smiling.. well at least that applies to this here hard man..... hair held up with butterflies makes me feel kinda dreamy.....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Oh err Matron 🦋🌼🦜
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

I posted a poem entitled "Neville the Kookaburra Bird ... if you care to read my tweet. as ever, .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago

Now there's an offer a guy can't refuse.... :)
Reading this, I felt like I was being swarmed by a buzzing plethora of sensations & I love the contrasts in your topsy-turvy message of stinging attraction. This is the height of uninhibited rambling, using whatever unexpected imagery tumbles out, not being overly fussy about the order & arrangement of words which can take the spunk out of a msg. You've captured the lovely messy stinging pleasure & pain that love almost always is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

that might be why it is so expensive to get now...
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Aha! You are a regular sleuth! Thanks for the info & since you've got so much time on your hands, it.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

ah do i wish i had so much time on my hands...ha ha..

Leap Leap Leap.
I see a funny side to this apart from the birds and the bees maybe one needs a sweet tooth! A lovely write Pat.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Thank you Andrew... yes, honey may be an Aphrodisiac... also. I love chocolate, but Honey is essent.. read more
awww this is beautiful allegory...
representations of love, using bees and the nature of them...
and the paradox of a sting being a good thing.
such a sweet write.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Jacob... yes, there is an expression to that effect. My father loved to read Shakespeare..... read more
Many songs have been rendered with tenderness and love
on the wings of a pure white Dove... my Love...

Posted 4 Years Ago



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