Heaven

A Cinquain dedicated to Norma

Heaven 

Sunshine smiling 

Garden in the Ozarks 

Moonlight through the window shining 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for honoring Norma's memories .. so few words but you painted a tapestry of the view from our front deck ... whether sun or moon we watch them rise there .. you have blessed my heart and soul and brought a beautiful comfort to me Pat... thank you is just not enough.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest E.... I love the word Pardon in poetry. You introduced me to the Cinquain created by Adelaide in 1915. So, this came together... thinking of you...
knowing that she still is there beside you in Spirit...
when dawn breaks and the birds sing. tenderly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much Pat .. you are a dear friend .. right here at the Cafe' ..love on ya! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... I changed the Title and first line to
“Heaven”. It occurred to me that Norma is and was an Angel on Earth. She is now the Light and you are and were her Knight in shining armor. tenderly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

so comforted by your wors and thoughts Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

oops ......words ;}

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... may feathers comfort you and dreams bring
peaceful meadows of snow covered roses that will blooming the Spring when birds will sing on wing ...
thinking of you as the sun rises and sets with renewed blessing from above. tenderly, Pat

[Robert Trakofler]

This morning I woke up to a crow sitting outside my window he was calling thru my sleep and I woke to his bidding another soul into the heavens or so the legend goes so either somebody i know has died or they were telling me to read your poem this morning:/ I was thinking of you yesterday when somebody did a humorous breakdown of the twelve days of Christmas and at the end I said who the heck would want 177 birds and afterwards i thought of you LOL

[Patricia]

Nicely done! what a beautiful view you must have

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Patricia... the longer we live... the more beauty we see in each other and in nature. Beauty is a feeling. tenderly, Pat

[Corset]

it all sounds heavenly to me too.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Corset... so sweet to know you have joined me in giving comfort to our beloved poet and friend, Gene. Another Star shines in the Sky... another Angel in the Choir. Wishing you a blessed Christmas 🎄.. gently, Pat

[Corset]

when a fellow writer passes, two more will step up from the trees and pick up their fallen torch we will all carry it forward. Be blessed through the holidays.

[Arundass TP]

Good imaginary expression. Keep it up

[Lydia Shutter]

How lovely your words are, Pat. Yes, Norma will be there in the sunset and the sunrise. She will always be in E's heart. Beautifully written. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lydi... your words are entwined with mine...
friendship is a blessing for all of us who share our griefs as well as our joys. As the World heals and
pain subsides, we will be as the Moon when darkness abides, and yet there is light. tenderly, Pat

[Lorry]

Beautifully said Pat, may she rest in peace. She'll be smiling down on Sir Noodle through that window, knowing now what we can only hope.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lorry ... your review is very touching and assuring. tenderly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Folks... although originally I thought
the Title would be Pardon.... I realize that
Heaven is a better Title, since Norma is
surely an Angel who was sent to Earth to gather
flowers and rain to nourish our hearts and mind.
I think of Pardon as poetic; however
Norma was an Angel... Amen

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Oh aww oh noh, yeah I read about poet Einstein's Norma passing away, this is such a sublime imagery tribute to her. I would have to look up ozarks. Rest is fab! So nice of you. Wish there are many like you. Kudos.

Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Zaynab... Norma is now a Light and we are blessed with another shining Star. May Peace be with you during this Season of love and devotion. Gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

could be the sunshine is apologizing for intruding...
or gets a pardon, and with its newfound freedom becomes that light shining through the window.

Much like Billy J. Kramer sang about...although he was on the outside looking up at her window.
"Late yesterday night, I saw a light shine through a window"
I guess the light works both ways...love works both ways...our lives are interrupted by it.
But what a pleasant interruption.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jacob... I changed my Title to "Heaven".
I realize that Norma was an Angel sent to Earth
to gather flowers and rain to nourish our hearts.
I love your comments on the poetic version of Pardon.
tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, beautiful thoughts to honour Norma in this way and I can see how you have already touched dear Mr E's heart and soul with your kindness. You have brought him some comfort at such a sad time and that is a blessing indeed.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... our hearts are entwined with our poets that we hold in our heart of hearts. We venture forth and realize that even the Virus cannot
destroy our faith, hope and charity. Even the lights of the Season burn brightly. Wishing you pleasant days of Joy and Songs of Wonder and Love. gently, Pat