Taking Chances

Taking Chances

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Easy on the Eyes... Creating my Demise...  

I stopped for awhile... He smiled and winked  

His Baby Blues and I knew I would be in His Arms 

before the Sun Set ... knowing that it was written 

in the Stars our lives would be entwined for  

many many Moons... 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with.. read more



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I read this one again today Pat and just wanted you to know, as it is so close to Valentine’s day what a perfect read it was. Such a romantic write. Must have been love at first sight.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


A very romantic interlude...
This is a fairy tale that spanned many many moons and stretches from here into eternity....
He was absolutely gorgeous and so were you.
I am absolutely delighted by this poem, dear Pat,

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest DIVYA… a special chance meeting brought us together… Amazing Grace… thank you for bein.. read more
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

You are welcome, dear Pat.
May you be blessed with endless beauty today....
Oh, love at first sight or love by the starry night. Sometimes the spark is so hot there's bound to a fire raging sooner or later. Here's to the eternal flame of love. I greatly enjoyed the read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Fabian… the blue of the Sky is by far a vision of Love… the sweetness of a Morning Glory. .. read more
My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with.. read more
Oh those eyes, those baby blues! I could recite this one to my hubby and his baby blues! Lovely writing my friend! I love this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Patricia... Eyes are very expressive ... after all they can see every detail of a persons v.. read more


I can feel this Pat .. and I imagine those words written are still out there just waiting for the return of your longing gaze ....................... a soft and gentle scribe indeed :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Neville… lovely to read your words… this Fourth of July weekend. Our Neighbors have bee.. read more
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LJ
A look at the past becomes a fine poem about lasting impressions and the creation of love that lingers. Alliteration and attention to detail are nicely done.
LJ

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear LJ… I appreciate your Review… a wonderful way to start my day here in Virginia by the Rappa.. read more
A very nice romantic dance in the poetry dear Pat. Would be nice to be brave and have a great adventure. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest John... with the Fourth of July almost here... with Colors Bursting in Air... you will be th.. read more
Wow a lovely sentimental poem of the beginning of love, though demise dah your lady killer eh. ' Many moons', sounds superb too. Kudos!

Plz check out my two newest poems and also pleez comment on one of those two that you wish to. Thanks

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Zaynab…. Melting like Ice Cream … I became a Sundae for His Sweet Tooth… thanks for stop.. read more
Those baby blues will do it Every time. 😃
Sometimes we just know where an encounter might go. Lovely poem, Pat. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Temp.... I appreciate your charming review. Wishing you Paths of Primrose Gold. gently, Pat
Temperance

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Temp

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