Taking Chances

Taking Chances

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Easy on the Eyes... Creating my Demise...  

I stopped for awhile... He smiled and winked  

His Baby Blues and I knew I would be in His Arms 

before the Sun Set ... knowing that it was written 

in the Stars our lives would be entwined for  

many many Moons... 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with.. read more



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Oh, love at first sight or love by the starry night. Sometimes the spark is so hot there's bound to a fire raging sooner or later. Here's to the eternal flame of love. I greatly enjoyed the read.

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Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dear Fabian… the blue of the Sky is by far a vision of Love… the sweetness of a Morning Glory. .. read more
My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with.. read more
Oh those eyes, those baby blues! I could recite this one to my hubby and his baby blues! Lovely writing my friend! I love this!

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Patricia... Eyes are very expressive ... after all they can see every detail of a persons v.. read more


I can feel this Pat .. and I imagine those words written are still out there just waiting for the return of your longing gaze ....................... a soft and gentle scribe indeed :)

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Neville… lovely to read your words… this Fourth of July weekend. Our Neighbors have bee.. read more
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LJ
A look at the past becomes a fine poem about lasting impressions and the creation of love that lingers. Alliteration and attention to detail are nicely done.
LJ

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear LJ… I appreciate your Review… a wonderful way to start my day here in Virginia by the Rappa.. read more
A very nice romantic dance in the poetry dear Pat. Would be nice to be brave and have a great adventure. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest John... with the Fourth of July almost here... with Colors Bursting in Air... you will be th.. read more
Wow a lovely sentimental poem of the beginning of love, though demise dah your lady killer eh. ' Many moons', sounds superb too. Kudos!

Plz check out my two newest poems and also pleez comment on one of those two that you wish to. Thanks

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Zaynab…. Melting like Ice Cream … I became a Sundae for His Sweet Tooth… thanks for stop.. read more
Those baby blues will do it Every time. 😃
Sometimes we just know where an encounter might go. Lovely poem, Pat. Thank you for sharing.

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Temp.... I appreciate your charming review. Wishing you Paths of Primrose Gold. gently, Pat
Temperance

1 Month Ago

Thank you. Temp
This was a beautiful poem that gave me good vibe and created a lovely romantic scene in my head!

The only criticism I could give might not even be criticism, if it is a style choice.

I wonder why you capitalized lots of words in the poem that weren't at the start of the line, such as ''His Arms' and 'Creating my Demise'.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

I suppose that is my style when Life becomes a Dip in the Ocean of Dreams..
Thanks for your .. read more
I believe in love at first sight
If it feels right it is right instinct tells us a lot
Good write ✍️

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Julie… Instinct is pretty strong… but we must be Cautions; however it usually gives us a S.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Month Ago

Yes true
I believe so

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My husband and I are aging with the Seasons... as each year goes by... nourished by the sun and Rain.... we grow and always learning. Our Children and Grandchildren are adjusting to a New World where.. more..

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