Did it hurt..?!

Him: "Did it hurt...?"

Her: "Did what hurt...?

Him: "When you fell from Heaven..."

Her: "Aww Kevin..."

Him: "Because your face is really f****d up......"

Her: "Umm, that wasn't funny..."

Him: "Sorry honey" :-)

Her: "......It really wasn't funny..."

Him: "Good thing I keep my day job and save my money..."

Her: "Why do you always do that...???"

Him: "Huh, what was that...???"

Her: "Why are you making a rhyme to everything I say...?"

Him: [Turns and looks away] ;-)

Reviews

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Awwh this was a sweet poem, and had a clever twist at the end... the way the description of his actions ryhmed were cool. Hmm i liked the way it was humerous, and not serious... like most of my poems :/ pha i really want to write some fun ones but im finding it hard. You're ma inspiration now, pha ;)

[Verneé]

I like it. It's a different take, creative and amusing. Can't help but smile after reading it.

[0_o Abbie]

lol hilarious! I loved it. So funny. Really well written!

[Elijah H. Muied (6 Deep..]

Lol... Well done!

[Taubah Blackman]

haha i like that lol

[Theta S. T.]

lol....now thats funny