Pessimist

Pessimist

A Poem by Pritesh
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Here is the narration of a man just deprieved of every hope and love of this nasty world....I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE IT.

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The endless, barren life is vain.
Shorn off hope and all disdain.

Only can I hear the solitary voice:
"No reason with you to rejoice!".

My luck pretends never to shine.
"Where will lead the destiny mine!".

The incredulous world to my thought ever,
enlisted my mind in the eccentric fewer.

In the world renounced none to criticize.
Even the upcoming hell not to me a surprise.

The brief statement I only insist:
"No sight is worse than pessimist".

© 2013 Pritesh


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Hi Pritesh,
Short poems should never be apologised for. It is more difficult to capture emotion and vision in them. You have done a great job here in a lovely poem with good meter and metaphor. You are young you will get over such set backs enjoy life and don't be a victim be a vixen!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pritesh

7 Years Ago

thanks!
Jasmine Thurber

7 Years Ago

Good poem.I think you did great, I bet you will do a lot better on the next poem you make.hope you h.. read more
Pritesh

7 Years Ago

thanks!



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Very well thought out and put.

Posted 7 Years Ago


That was a nice read..
Keep that up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pritesh

7 Years Ago

thanks
stars are far

7 Years Ago

Welcome
There are a lot of great rhymes in here, and the overall poem is a very powerful piece. You put your words together in a wonderful way, and this is a very well done poem. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pritesh

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Admiral Kirk

7 Years Ago

No problem!
wow, cool I like it! The rhyming scheme really helped it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very good poem. Not good to be a pessimist. Wanting and expecting less leave us with weak goals and dreams. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


realism... it's realism. even though the topic defies my beliefs i still love it because your writing has enough power to override one's beliefs by the beauty of your words. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short but very nice. I like the idea of it i feel you force ryhme it a little bit as it feels like sometiems the lines are merely placed there with the intention to ryhme.
It is a very powerful piece with anger and with sadness, a great sense of grief adn rage at the world seems to laden here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The writing is beautiful, it is the kind of poem one must read many times to get the full effect, simply because there is so much to take in! I love it, definitely one of my favourites

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pritesh

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind word!
this is a very good poem it is well paced and versed the rhyme scheme you seem to pull of with no hesitation or problem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pritesh

7 Years Ago

Thanks marie!
marie

7 Years Ago

no problem :)
You are an optimist.Good write

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Pritesh

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I am of the common species of teenagers that rarely has a single trait uncommon, but the only thing that I hold distinct is perception.I deem, to have a unique perspective is to personify one's charac.. more..

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