friendship flourishes

friendship flourishes

A Poem by Prritiy

 

free from frauds
fidelity, fertile field
faith feeds feelings
forgets flaws, frictions
frustrations feeble
face flaws firmly
flaunt fervent fondness
forgive fallible, faults
fortitude flees fright
furthers fair fellowship
fences fragile frames
freshened fervor fares
footing, fragile forms
fulfills fancies, frolics
floral flames fruits
friendship flourishes

 5 pm, 17//2012

© 2013 Prritiy


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A great play of words, all pertaining to friendship. Your creative streak is in full flow here! Great read Prritiy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your precious time and words Divya :)
Ayvid N

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. I really felt strongly about this write. It hurts when friends are insensitive. Tha.. read more
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

yes it does :( :)
best wishes
Great poem on friendship ....your feelings have flourished in your poem!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Prritiy

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot.
It did flourished with the great message.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

thanks for fantastic comment.
Awesome piece, Prritiy. Very good use of alliteration and assonance. I like this one.
Magnificent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Margaux :)
Fabulous , fantastic , flaming good...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...You are welcome...:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

.......... :)
and here comes the flap, flap,... batman smile.....
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)...........
Awesome work!
The vocabulary is enriched automatically as one travels from the start to the end of the lovely piece.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

I thank you Zainul for being so encouraging and understanding always :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are always my lovely friend and we are here to support each other.:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

........... :)
Very well written, every word an image then you wrap it all together, Congratulations.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Dear.
Have a nice time.
alliteratively fantastic fun....:o)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words.
Have a nice Sunday. :)

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Tags: fraud, fidelity, faith, feelings, frictions, flaws, forgive, faults, fragile, friendship, flourishes

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Prritiy
Prritiy

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