The story after

Ps. Read my note!

 

Ath-mun danced and Ath-mun sang

Nothing will ever be the same

After that night, the long awful fight

They cried and mourned for the love ones torned

The friends they lost was the highest cost

But all the same they remembered their names

Months later the tribe rebuilt

Some of them men were filled with guilt

Ath-mun led the people around

Even though she lost her crown

She might have been royal but that didn't matter

She took care of her tribe and all of their chatter.

Some missionaries came and spread the news

About Jesus' love and what He did for me and you.

They all went to Jesus when they died and met up with "Amos" in the sky

 

Author's Note

I had to write a poem for English about what happens to this guys sister(who happens to be an African princess) after he and all the strong me and women are sold into slavery...

You probably won't get it but it is from "Amos Fortune Free Man".. :D

Reviews

[marie]

great job i love the image you have created, a little more clarity for those who haven't read the book would be extremely helpful, ie: a little backstory in the note explaining briefly what happened before hand. your doing so great keeo up the good work:)

[StayAnchored]

I would have loved some more clarity but that was basically all I had read of the book... lol :P

[StayAnchored]

Thanks! :)

[marie]

lol well i guess that would explain it then:) and no problem i enjoy your work:)

[Sir Joseph]

Bravo yet again!:) wonderful piece telling a great story! :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I still haven't gotten my grade back... I hope I got a good grade lol
:P

[Sir Joseph]

Wow well i bet it will be great! :P

[Acer]

Loved the package, you've a great talent indeed.

[StayAnchored]

You're so sweet! Thank you!!

[Acer]

firstly thank's for your sweet word, & now it's my pleasure.;-)
you too very pretty.

[StayAnchored]

:D Aww! My family and friends don't quite appreciate my poems so it means a lot that everyone on here does!

[Acer]

Just believe in yourself,
be calm, be happy,
keep smile, & just try to touch the sky.

[Chidoriflower]

I read that book for school and I had to explain why he lived a good life. I thought this was pretty good, and captures the freedom we have in Jesus Christ. :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! It was hard to do a poem on something that I had barely read but I think it'll get a good grade ;)