How to...

My late-night prayer for a friend...

God, You've placed these feelings in my heart

But I'm still unsure of how to start-

How to begin going your direction, 

how to achieve your definition of perfection

How to reach down and out,

how to show your love without a doubt

How to make him smile through the pain,

how to help You make him whole again

God, I really don't know where to begin,

just please bring healing to my dear friend.

Reviews

[Rye]

What a wonderful write, and quite lovely and sincere

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much!

[Jeremy Hiles]

What a great poem, the rhyme and rhythm are very smooth! Just a lovely poem! And I hope your friend is alright! Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work!

[StayAnchored]

Thanks, Jeremy!!! I appreciate it! :D

[Jeremy Hiles]

You're welcome!!! :D

Sorry I am commenting on this so late lol, I didn't see that you had posted it till now!

[StayAnchored]

You're perfectly fine! (to be honest, I had forgotten that I had posted it too xD)

[Jeremy Hiles]

haha thanks, my friend! XD

[Chidoriflower]

I like the rhythm and pacing of the poem, it's pretty nice. I hope your friend finds healing. Thank you for sharing :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much for the review! He is definitely doing better! :)