Eidetic Silence

Eidetic Silence

A Poem by Robin
"

Instant Memories

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Her name was a poem 

drifting upon a garden of secrets

of tears and passion 

of fear and loathing  in a  brave new world 

I felt the shadows fall across her eyes 


restless veils 

the black lace of a naked summer 

I , her prince and staret 
 
her retreat 


 

our bed surrounded in flames 

the candle ~ Anastasia

flickering eve 

yearning for the moon 

we never slept

like these memories 

entangled souls

bending time 

eidetic silence 

under the crush of love 

 




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Do not copy or use without expressed written consent . 
All rights reserved.  Copyright © 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral 

© 2012 Robin


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Wow this stirring inspiration never has you at a loss of words...and the space placed in between is a vase living such thought in a beautiful arrangement, cut wet from time and strung along the mind like the many stages of what poetry should leave and never do..amazing

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Wow this stirring inspiration never has you at a loss of words...and the space placed in between is a vase living such thought in a beautiful arrangement, cut wet from time and strung along the mind like the many stages of what poetry should leave and never do..amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You express things in a way that I wish I could, you really do... I cannot even find the words to review it; your work to me is so elusive... I feel this is because I have not reached a point in my life, my poetry, and my mental state in which I can fully comprehend the depth and meaning of what you write, but it does touch me, which is why I continue to read it.. Thank you and well done :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel I will be contemplating this instant for quite a while, as always Robin, you make me think.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Beautiful writing Robin--both deeply fluid and evocative of a picture taken in a moment of time--

entangled souls
bending time
eidetic silence
under the crush of love

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'garden of secrets' is brilliant.
'crush of love' too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crush of love. What a beautiful expression.
Your writes are unique.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one held me like a moth drawn to a flame.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love holds us even after the door was long ago shut, leaving stamps, proof of its existence on the dusty bookshelves of our minds. it was worth falling into. what is sleep when beauty lies in your arms.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Gorgeous!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah your distinct voice continues, what were the influences of such a voice? I'd be interested to know...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Robin

11 Years Ago

I live , I express
Eloha

11 Years Ago

Japanese poetry, ecclectic spiritualty, etc....I assume.
Robin

11 Years Ago

everything that I find along my path ...

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