Temples

 

ouroboros in white jade

 

basho in the garden of dreams

 

a giesha winks

 

coy 

 

gentle palms attentive

 

a diamond on velvet

 

lipstick on glass

 

Red - I can taste it

 

lush words spill 

 

butterfly shimmers solar plexus

 

fingers glide spinal secrets

 

folded temples of origami

 

a romantic wrapped in Zen

 

lovers instinct - breathless

 

spiral concerto

 

my arms raise her

 

spread wings - free her

 

honeybee nectar

 

savored sun

 

naked morning glow

 

eyes in rhythm

 

radiance

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jessi Leigh]

I LOVE IT! So...... JUICY...So gorgeous! "butterfly shimmers solar plexus ,fingers glide spinal secrets" honeybee nectar

"savored sun
naked morning glow
eyes in rhythm
radiance"
You paint the most magnificent pictures.... Can't thank you enough for your wonderful writings.

[Ruth]

And the last word sums this superb work up magnificently! Radiance!
This is astonishingly beautiful sweetheart...every line leads to only more bliss! xoxo

[Seshat Nidaba]

I enjoyed how disembodied this was from the parts, and how the sum of the parts created an impression. Extremely unique, unfiltered and surreal.

I resonate with the oriental non-secular flavor and Taoistic imprints.

[just rose.]

you had me at basho.

[Nimbus Thread]

This is in a dimension all its own. It can capture and hold one aloft in its magic.

[Crow]

Beautiful and soulful imagery, painted the canvass in my mind.

[arbitrary jane]

all of this... naturally... but for some reason that line : 'eyes in rhythm' ... that is the stand out image for me. so many ways to understand that. thoughtful, lyrical, and intricate, as always.

[zig]

what a great way to worship, very sensual. have you read any of the classic japanese tanka? for many centuries, it was a large part of courting rituals, much like what you have here, i like you might enjoy them. anyway, loved the poem.

[Kenneth The Poet]

You breathe nature poetically, that's for sure.

[Jack Heslop]

This is like one long orgasm in words. Brilliant. The origami temples was my favourite line. Thank you for the read.

[Nobody.]

the movement, color, scents and scenes stir my emotions, sooth my soul and sing a new song that resounds from every chamber wall of my heart. you're a damn fine bard sir. never ceases to amaze.
cheers!