When The Time Comes

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

Author's Note

Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

Reviews

[Amanda]

this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

[angelina neves]

very tender and romantic! Lovely!

[DecemberXSunset]

Awww... that's such a sweet poem...

Ha... I wouldn't have thought you the "soft" type... xD lol...

"There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises"
I really like that line..
-Ashli- n__n

[jen -- JG]

A sweet, tender, loving poem here Joe, that begins with the longing and a lovers promise of being there at the end even if you are no more than friends - an eternal and selfless love.

It is still a longing but the poem offers a promise - (this is more like a set of vows to me) - promising to love, honor, protect and care for the one you love, for eternity.

The few spelling errors are minor and take nothing away from the delight the reader gets from reading "When The Time Comes."

Well done Joe - Well done.

Jen-JG

[RareRed]

Lovesick isn't a bad thing....great read.

[THERISA]

Too bad, more people are lovesick. The world would be a healther and safer place for all. Your poem is romantic love to the one that you love. Wish that special one realizes how they have captured your heart to inspire this romantic poem from you. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

Therisa

[Valentine]

Hey kiddo, nothing wrong with being lovesick..I sometimes feel like that and I have beeen married for some time..Just thank God you found someone to be lovesick for..I pity those who never have know that lovesick feeling..God bless...valentine

[LostCauze[:P]]

Beautiful and Full of emotion. I really liked it, maybe because im lovesick to :'( . Damn teenage harmones. lol well i really enjoyed your poem man, the structure of it was very creative because of what you say during the pauses of each stanza. Who ever you are love sick about would really enjoy this poem, because the way i see it, you wrote this truly from your heart. Keep writing.

[nicki_504]

Well there's nothing wrong with being lovesick it inspired the greatest poets, great sentiment and raw emotion. There is alot of honesty in the poem's apparent simplicity. Your use of time throughout, both literally and symbolically, are powerful elements that address, emphatically, the timeless nature of love. Splendid Poem.

It was wonderful. Its so very emotional. It described the emotions of promising yourself to someone forever and truly not being able to be without them. I thoroughly enjoyed it.