When The Time Comes

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

Author's Note

Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

Reviews

[Amanda]

this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

[GenMuffin7]

imagine what could happen if you gave this to the person you wrote this to.

consider it :D

[Gema]

Ohh this is cute!
Tear i love the way u have written such love such fluffiness lol to the one u love!
Bliss promises togetherness.
Aww love is a billant thing it is the best feeling ever like a drug it lifts u off the ground!
Well done x

[Andrea A. Wentz]

This is tearfully romantic (yes it brought tears to my eyes), heart wrenching, yet a beautiful world to walk into. I truly love your romantic works. I've never read anything like them! The most catching part is that it's all written with such sincerity, no hint of overglorification or uncertainty that these promises can be kept. It all seems like a dream world, but one that feels possible and real, one that you can actually bring another into and stay there forever. This is amazing work! :)

[Angela]

This is a very beautiful piece Joe. So full of love and passion. She is a very lucky lady to have and know such a love as this. It is a wonderful tribute to that never ending emotion.

"When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue"


Call me a romantic but this stanza is my favorite. To watch the sky being painted blue together is very romantic indeed. What an awesome poem. Bravo!!

[I Am THE LADY POET]

A very beautiful Poem

[K. Aurora]

I think this is written from the heart of a truly noble spirit. It speaks of love and protection in a way that shows devotion to another.
It may indicate lovesickness, but it says alot about the quality of the soul with in.
I think that all things flow to the hands of Divine Providence. Just like one may have the love of a pet last for years. Yet, in the end...They truly bare their heart on the day they must bury their friend.
Life happens, life lives then fades. All we can really do is the best we can, and have faith God will see us through.

Wonderful poem!

P.S. Line one last stanza...I think "Get" would sound better as "Gets" :)

[HEAVY METAL LOVE]

aw s**t that's sweet.

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

There is nothing wrong with being lovesick. this poem hits a lot of emotions those who are lovesick and in love feel...Great job on this one!..=)

[Cassandra]

Sick as a dog it seems :) But this was a very pretty poem.

[Michelle Lea]

awwwwwesome!!! awwwwwwwwesome write!!! I love it, it sounds like a dream come true!!