When The Time Comes

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

Author's Note

Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

Reviews

[Amanda]

this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

[Jane Doe]

Beautiful and captivating! A great poem, full of passion and emotion.

[Windy]

I love it. I think the fact that you are basically baring your soul and all in the name of "Love" is a beautiful wonderous thing and I applaud you. I am putting this in my favorites for sure. It is so full of yearning and love and the willingness to be "EVERYTHING" for someone is a wonderful thing. She is very lucky to have such a man. I can't say enough about this poem, I just love it. As for "details" per say, you have written a strong, emotionally charged, well flowing, poem and painted a picture of a love so beautiful ...most women would give anything to have this kind of devotion. WEll done, Congrats on a super job. :)

[ganymeder]

Lovesick? I guess I'm a little morbid, because it seemed to me to be talking about meeting a lover again in Heaven, perhaps from the point of view of the person who had already passed on and was waiting. I guess I sort of missed the part about an aspiring love affair.

I did really get the whole best friends in love feel from it though, and it was beautifully written. :)

[Inda Lauryn]

Lovesick may be putting it mildly. I'm hoping this is something you read to your loved one every anniversary at least if not every other opportunity. The promise of forever and unconditional love is beautifully expressed. I'm so glad you shared.

[Amy Whetzell]

Lovesick indeed, but lovesick can be good.

[JC]

Love does inspire the heart, or in this case the pen.

I really like the layout of the piece, I think it adds to the flow.

"I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator", well if that doesn't make a girl's heart melt, nothing will.

Kudos!
JC

[darkgurl]

WOW! this is so very beautiful and very heart pouring such a sweet and wonderful testimony of love, This is a most wonderful write.

[closed account]

love sick indeed!! almost made me tear... what a beautiful way to dig deep and put it out!! I so love this poem, I hope you get her and love her and keep her forever!! beautiful............ perfect......

[Emily B]

Lessons hard-learned from an older and wiser man I would guess. . .

[indianhost]

i like this poem and you got some lucky lady there and a lovely son may god bless you all with health