The FLIRT! (sassy fun)

Kaduta … try one, it's fun! 😃 (see instructions in Author's Note)

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Author's Note

"Kaduta"
An original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins © 17 Nov 2006
A Katuda ("Falling" in Italian) is a poem about any topic, composed in a minimum of at least one 6-line verse of 3 Rhyming Couplets, but no limit to number of verses.
Alignment: Author’s Choice
Syllable Counts Per Line: 2/2/2/2/9 (5-4)/9 (5-4)
Rhyme Scheme: aa, bb, c-c, c-c
(for additional verses, use: dd, ee, f-f, f-f etc)

Illustration: Bus Stop Pin Up Beauty © by Baron Gerald Von Lind

Well-meant critique and constructive comments are always welcome! : )

Reviews

[lightsong]

perfect name for the form, it read as falling leaves, slowly one by one, two by two... then it is stacked at the end like the leaves under the tree, nice and naughty, a good smile we need sometimes, thank You for sharing both Your form and the sweet little cutie too.

[Richard🖌]

Dear Gh!
A "smile" is the perfect announcement for that which you've spread across this olde bard's mug from the sheer joy contained and glowing from your thoughtfully expressed words of praise, delightful descriptives, and warm embrace they've so sweetly surrounded me with.

I love it!
What's more to say, but you're as welcome as can be, and I thank you equally as much for treating me … a big, happy HUG! ⁓ Richard : )

[sette]

it is fun reading the poem with the unique style in terms of syllabication able to weave words beautifully.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, sette!
How happy I am you've dropped by for a read and had fun.
Thank you for the nice compliment, too.

Brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard ; )

[sette]

you are welcome

[Lydia Shutter]

Bawdy and adorable. Love the artwork too. Great job. Lydi**

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, sweet Lydi!

You know how to make a bard smile! ⁓ Richard ; D

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Great Pin-Up !!

All the right words, in all the right places..lol


Jazzy..

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Jasmine! : )
I thought you might get a smile outta this little cutie.

Big hugs! ⁓ Richard ; )

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Hugs back to you....... ♥

[Cherrie]

I like the set-up with a two sided exchange, oh so cute.
Really fun

[Richard🖌]

Howdy, Cherrie!
You're just the merry cherry on top this one needs!

Thanks for coming by to enjoy the fun! ⁓ Richard ; )

[wordman]

when a woman feels beautiful this is what you might get
they all like to flirt a little,,love the pin up,looks like it was from the fifties

[Richard🖌]

Hey, My Friend! : D
Thought you'd get a kick outta this-un, with the nifty-fifty look and cutie pie flirt.
Women do get frisky when they're pretty, and they're all pretty, eh? ; )

Lovely review, buddy! ⁓ Richard

[wordman]

well,i did,my pleasure

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Lol- how funny- great minds think alike I was on this same wavelength today as according to wonderful picture you have here- wonderful cheeky and fun- she stood at the door welcoming him in- lol🌹

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Kelly! : )
You made it even more fun … you got it jussst right!

Thanks for the read 'n grin! ⁓ Richard ; )

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure and yes below the belt we need to go to excite the senses at time..but..decorum is necessary🌹