P O E T R Y . . . (to the craft)

STELLANETTE (an original poetic form created by Stella Armour) … this piece is inspired by her wonderfully rendered poem, "My Soulmate" at: http://www.writerscafe.org/Stella45/writing/

P O E T R Y

     

Penmanship!

Joy of writing …

penmanship.

In what better ways can our lives be told,

with truest emotions and thoughts expressed,

ink blended with desire and deepest love?

Joy of writing …

Penmanship!

Imagery!

Word picture paintings …

imagery.

Onto the canvases within our minds,

grammar’s brushes stroke masterpieces prime;

upon imagination’s palette, blend

word picture paintings …

Imagery!

Metaphor!

Poetry’s living soul …

metaphor.

The keys to doors otherwise unfathomed,

grasped, or felt within the depths of one’s core;

that which breathes life into words, so they’ll dance.

Poetry’s living soul …

Metaphor!

Emotion!

Heart’s deepest feelings …

emotion.

Without emotion, no passion exists.

As passion wanes, poetry’s spirit dies,

sure as sunless grapes wither on the vine.

Heart’s deepest feelings …

Emotion!

Musicality!

Smooth rhythmic flow …

musicality.

In beautiful words one may write their verse;

yet, without flow it’s little more than chat …

akin to dancing an offbeat tempo;

smooth rhythmic flow …

Musicality!

Inclusiveness!

’Tis mere illusion …

inclusiveness.

Defining every poetic aspect,

how impossible that would surely be;

for, to undertake that unlikely task,

’tis mere illusion …

Inclusiveness!

Richard W. Jenkins

© 21 June 2018

Author's Note

STELLANETTE
© by Stella Armour
(an original poetry form)

Format
Line 1) Adjective or noun.
Line 2) Description of subject (3 to 4 words).
Line 3) Repeat 1st line.
Line 4) 5 and 6 are each 10 syllable phrases about the subject, without rhyme.
Line 7) Repeat line 2, but can be worded slightly differently, if wished.
Line 8) Repeat line 1.
This pattern to be repeated at least 4 times (four verses minimum).

Well-meant, constructive critique is always welcomed! : )

Reviews

[lightsong]

I'm sure that Stella was more than delighted to see this masterpiece written with her own form, even to choose this subject to write about with it, gives it beautiful meanings and deep appreciation from You to her.

the C R A F T is in each word, verse, thought, feeling, title, letter, presentation You so generously finely laid for us, all "inclusiveness" in Your most brilliantly written last verse.

I think I can't give justice to this magnificent "Crafted Poetry".

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Light!
Fortunately, Stella did seem to be quite pleased with my effort to compose in her form, and as you say, with the subject, as-well.
Thank you for reading this one and for your delightfully gratifying praise.

You've put a lovely smile on my day! ⁓ Richard : )

[lightsong]

Yes, I just read her review to You, she was SO pleased for sure!

[Jade]

I think you have them all down pat, This is wonderful
Really enjoyed this. Awesome writing

[Richard🖌]

Thank you sincerely, Dear Brandie🌻
Most gratefully and warmly, I appreciate You for reading this unusual piece from Stella Armour's original forms repertoire.

Especially, I thank You for your expressed praise, enjoyment, and lovely compliment … brightest blessings, unto You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Susan 🦋]

A STELLANETE! I have never heard of this format before ( shocker huh) This is sparking my interest to maybe try it. I like that you chose poetry as the main subject theme. Easy, clear and smooth flowing meanings and explanations. loving the lay-out too :-) Actually, this forms seems a bit musical to me...Do you feel that?? Like it should be put to song or clapped..Of course, i love all your writings...as they seem to either hit me in the head, have my mind in a whirl, ponder endless questions or flat out hit me in the heart till I'm reduced to mush!!! yes, you know..those ones. hehe..BUT..really liking this.. :-)))

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Susan!
I had never heard of ti before, either.
Stella's gorgeous poem, "My Soulmate" at: http://www.writerscafe.org/Stella45/writing/ caught my eye and inspired me to give it a try, not a bad one for you, too, if you feel the urge.
I do feel the music of the form, but hers is like a symphony in comparison … be sure to read it, you'll love it.
That you love anything about my writings simply thrills me, but to know you love all of them is swoon-worthy … sighhh!

What I love most … is how you spoil me.
A big thank you HUG! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Kelly Scheppers]

You consistently exude a dignified caliber of class every time you write these forms, Richard. I'd be throwing roses at your feet, if I could. Any preference of color?

Bravo, my friend!

[Richard🖌]

Oh, Dear Kelly,
With your special stamp of effulgent approval in accoladedic fervor, how could I fail to melt into my socks?

Well, as a Texan, yellow is quite popular. ; )
Thanks, Dear One! ⁓ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

...yellow roses, it is...my favorite!

[송지ፏ..]

Very nice. I liked how simple it was because it was easy for a foreigner to read. I liked how gave a definition of the words too. It was a nice read.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, 송지ፏ
I appreciate your kind words and that you've selected one of poems to read and review.

Blessings! ⁓ Richard : )

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much. The pleasure was mine.

[Richard🖌]

Kamsa-hamnida, Ji-Suk. : )

[kitty]

Words live on and like a balm it soothes the longing heart for days long spent are but a memory of those we often yearn. Tribute to a wonderful writer/poetess.

[Richard🖌]

Welcome, Dear Kitty,
It is so nice to find you here this morning … you go so well with my mug of steaming tea. : )
How lovely your words trip off the tongue.
It was an honor and privilege to be granted permission to compose in Stella's excellent form … it was a pleasure I hope more will undertake.

Hugs 'n happy blessings … thank you, M'Lady! ⁓ Richard : )

[kitty]

A Lady Grey to you kind sir! Glad to read the work of 'Masters' and happy to compose for humble folk too in 'plain english'. Happy to read of those who satisfy a need. In all humility I thank you, Sire!

[Stella Armour]

Wow, you have mastered my form at first attempt, and so beautifully Richard.

I love the subject you have chosen for there could be no better one !

Thank you so much for writing this Stellanette , i am so overwhelmed that you chose to use it :)

[Richard🖌]

G'morning, Dear Lady Stella,
Your warm accolades, expressed enjoyment, and appreciation of my humble effort spreads a warm smile across this craggy olde mug, as did your generous permission to compose in your amazing original form.
I thoroughly enjoyed the experience, and I agree, "What better subject than 'Poetry' could there be to compose in such a splendidly designed poetic form, eh?"
I loved every word, line, and verse that seemed to flow of its own accord from my grateful pen.
"Mastered"?
Oh-MY, Stella … I'm all a'blush!
Thank you for letting me write in your own form … I hope more will compose with it, it is such a smooth and easy pleasure, but a delightful challenge, too.

I loved it, Dear Master Poetess! ⁓ Richard : )

[Stella Armour]

I loved this one too, a shame it hasn't received more comments … but never mind :)

[Richard🖌]

Give 'em a chance, they'll make a showing. ; )