Get My Attention

Get My Attention

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Get my attention
with a sly come-hither look
while cooking dinner

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
You knew my fantasies had to involve food...

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guys that cook . . . sweet n_n

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Indeed it is! Thanks!
Haha men who cook. Can we get an amen? Love it. Great job, Rita :)
-Riley

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

They are truly the best! Thanks, Riley!
Awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Bam!!!! Last line KO

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked this. Thanks!
Well you got my attention with your title. And now what would you like for dinner? ;)
Short, to the point, and very true I am sure.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, no man was ever rejected while doing the cooking! ;) Thank you for reading!
Is it true that women's porn is the image of a good looking man making dinner or doing the laundry? Very nicely done Rita, a romantic piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Absolutely! Thanks, Steve!
sensual fruits for afters?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

;) Quite possibly...
Food will always get attention...and a look will too, depending on who'se doing the cooking and the looking..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) You're right about that, Marie!
Oohh....I really like this one. I picture coking some Italian food..a few too many glasses of wine and that longing look. Great fantasy.. damn I have to do mine too!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

;) Yep - Italian is preferred! Thanks, Red!
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Always!! Lol.. your welcome!
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Always!! Lol.. your welcome!
Where's the LIKE here? This one tickles, figures it'd be food! Ha could take this so many places, sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! I couldn't resist... Thanks, Frieda!

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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