What I Did Today

senryu

Was in the bedroom

working up a sweat all day 

organizing clothes

Author's Note

And what were you thinking? ;)

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Haha, you got me there with that last line! Ah laundry, another one of those energy-sapping things that is always so much more fun on a Monday ;-) I like what you did with this one, especially that twist with the third line.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, C. Just having some fun with a boring task! :)

[Renée]

lol that it will ! but the finished work is so satisfying !

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Yes, it really is!

[Marie]

I do this once a year myself. Not very exciting.

[Rita L. Sev]

No, not at all - but finished for another year... Thank God!

[SyberRose]

Cute one...believe it or not I don't sweat ha...enjoyed reading Rita...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

I am not too much of a sweater, but when it's over 90 degrees and I'm stuck in a small room... ugh! Thanks, Rose! :)

[ShelleyA]

A good write and snapshot of your day. Creative visual. A well crafted Senryu. Excellent use of brevity. Well penned. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Shelley

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

I wasn't thinking
but riding warm byways
the wind in my hair

:))

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks for your creative reply, E!

[Einstein Noodle]

love and peace and joy to you Rita... E.

[Pryde Foltz]

got a chuckle over this one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Glad to give a smile, thanks!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a waste of sweat but that is life always getting in the way.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, yes it it!

[Rita L. Sev]

*is (duh - can't spell 'is') :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LOL, yet you spelled organized,

[Angel]

Excercising to your newest Zumba dvd?
Ummm...wrestling with the dog?

[Rita L. Sev]

Haha! You would have such wholesome thoughts! (though I did wrestle with the dog a bit, too...) :)

[Frieda P]

Hmmm depends on where said clothes were hanging, no? ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ooh, la la! ;)