Very Merry

Very Merry

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Season's Greetings!

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Red orbs ornament every corner store

and my kitchen’s full to bursting

with these precious gifts galore

 

Green leaves fill the senses

a world of joy implied

tomato basil sandwiches ~

Christmas in July


© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Jersey tomatoes are in! :)

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Woo, Jersey tomatoes! This one is really tasty Rita! Tomato basil sandwiches are really great :-) I like how you describe the tomatoes, especially the detail about them coming from the corner store. Also, that closing part about Christmas in July is a nice touch.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, C. I just get so excited to see the Jerseys at this time of year... :)
Clockwork

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
Tomato basil sandwiches? Sounds good...
Christmas in July! I'm in!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Best sandwich ever! But only available from July through September... :)
Angel

11 Years Ago

I'll have to try one.
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Mmmm - gotta get good, crusty Italian bread. A light toasting, sliced tomatoes, drizzle of olive oi.. read more
The poem and the photo of the tomatoes got my hunger pangs up so high...Ha!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) Go get some tomatoes! Ha! Thanks, Cassie!
Nothing better than fresh, ripe tomatoes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

We wait for them all year, then eat them every day... :)
yummy piece and perfect for tomato season! Cute write ( :

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Renee! :)
Renée

11 Years Ago

the farmers market thanks you..you know I had to go after reading & looking at that ! lol
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) I would spend all day at a farmers market if I could (not many here in the city...) Hope yours we.. read more
Christmas in July!
Between your description and the picture I am now wanting this to eat. No such luck tonight though.

Wonderfully cheery poem. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Rogue! It was delicious... ;p
Now this poem makes me hungry. It inspired me to write this mono-rhyme gift poem for you: It's in /0/0/0/ seven syllable meter:

Tomatoes

Those red orbs whom I adore
wait for me within the store
each a morsel to explore
from their skin down to their core
over bread, spice, cheese, and more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Aethereal
what a delicious poem!

the aroma came through the computer, but don't worry, i didn't try to bite through the screen.

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

My kitchen smells like basil - the most beautiful bouquet in the world! Thanks, Jacob!
How delicious a read, and your photo is mouthwatering. I wish I wasn't allergic to those red beauties, alas, I have mine with red peppers, still the same festive feel.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Mmmm... I love red peppers too! :) Thank you, R&B!
Hi Rita. A very good write and greeting; a lovely way to celebrate Christmas in July. Lovely red and green. Happy summer! Well penned. Write on!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Thank you, Shelley! We went to the store today to see that the long-awaited tomatoes were in -.. read more
ShelleyA

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, Rita. It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a great day!

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