Jellybeans

Sticky jellybeans

colorful, sweet and sour

roll around the boards

Author's Note

Early morning people watching on the boardwalk...

Reviews

[OBWhiteHawk]

Very sweet! Lol, pun intended. I have always wanted to go to the ocean and hangout on a boardwalk.

[Rita L. Sev]

There is a lot of activity on a boardwalk, but I think the best is people-watching! Thank you, OBWH!

[Lydia Shutter]

Mmmmmmm....now I want to have some jelly beans! I realize this is a metaphor for the world, but, hey, it is a good excuse for my sweet tooth! :) Very cute write! Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Food imagery - always works up an appetite! Thanks, Lydi!

[Leonard Birch]

I like this. Colorful people are everywhere. A wonderful write.
Leo

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes they are! Thank you, Leo!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...they all look like colored jellybeans...humans are really a colorful lot...

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, they are - and some are indeed sweet - or sour! :) Thanks, Jacob!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rita. A good write and skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Perfect syllabic form. Vivid imagery. You paint a snapshot of this scene that any reader can see in their mind's eye. Good depth of feeling. A fun read. Well penned. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Shelley!

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Rita. Have a great day!

[Jack...]

I always loved people watching on the boardwalk. Very cute Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

I like people watching everywhere; the boardwalk has a particularly colorful mix... :) Thanks, Jack!