Looking Glass

The mirror on my wall

will not speak to me at all,

even when I pointedly inquire.

 

I ask if I am fair,

but the glass will simply stare;

how will I ever know if I’m admired?

Author's Note

So often, we look to our looks to determine our worth...

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Amen to that my friend...it's no coincidence to me that a mirror caused such a stir in Snow White...then again, I think that was the central premise of that story anyway, so everyone probably thought that haha But you've put your own unique spin on it with a mirror that doesn't answer...maybe there's a shred of optimism in that though, maybe the mirror wants you to take it into your own hands and not seek that approval...a thought-provoking little piece to be sure :)

[Rita L. Sev]

I like your insight on this - that the mirror is silent for a reason... :) Thanks, K!

[kublakhan27]

You're most welcome my friend :)

[Cassie]

The mirror I had once spoke to me and told me am old and chubby...how come yours does not praise you or put you down? I need a mirror like that one. hahaha

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh, I had that mirror, too - smashed that thing to pieces.. ;)

[Cassie]

hahahaha...I did so too after marie advised me to get another one. hahaha

[Troy Henson]

We are who we are Rita. The mirror always stares back hard. You only need to look as far as your writing, the reviews and comments to know that you are certainly admired.

Nice piece.
Regards
Troy

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Troy! I appreciate that!

[Renée]

I grew up with .. "Pretty is as pretty does" I love antique mirrors with their imperfections.. they seem to reflect a bit better in my small opinion ( ; Well Done Poetess RIta !

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah yes, the antique mirror, with it's own imperfections... a much better judge of my own. Thank you, Renee! :)

[Renée]

my pleasure to read a piece that makes us think ! ( :

[Marie]

Fair Rita, everyone admires you...

[Rita L. Sev]

I thank you sincerely, Marie!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rita. I love this write. You have a great sense of humor. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy. Clever word play and very good use of brevity. Good imagery, flow and tone. Rhyme is good as is the scheme. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed beautifully in this piece. Good depth of feeling. Good word choice; nice alliteration and consonance with good assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Shelley! I'm glad you got the sentiment here - the impact our looks have in our society ...

[ShelleyA]

Yes, I did and you're welcome. It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a good night!

[Angel]

LOL...typical Rita write. I love it, as I love all of your wonderful writing.
And Jack...wow. I can't possibly put it any better than that word-wizard put it.
You are loved, my little bird. More...you are needed around here.
I think I speak for everyone in the Cafe who knows you, Hun...
Thank you.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, Angel! I really was just venting about how society makes people so image-aware, though I do appreciate the love form WC! :)

[Angel]

So, you get a pat on your pretty head for being so smart...
No harm done,yeah?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i look in the mirror and say..."i am still here to have a reflection, thank you!"

[Rita L. Sev]

I like that response a lot! Thanks, Jacob!

[Frieda P]

I think as we get older, we realize that beauty fades, but wit, intelligence, kindness,what's in somone's heart, these are the kind of things that people most admire us for, and being able to blow unicorns & rainbows out your arse. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh, of course - let us not underestimate those unicorns! Yes, I gave up the fight for outer beauty long ago - and found much more...

[Frieda P]

Have you ever noticed how a really good looking person hardly looks so hot after they show their crusty interior, same goes from the average Joe, I think once we peel back the layers and see what they're really made of, they look 10x's better....ha, the unicorns, if only.

[Jack...]

Well, I will tell you this
and I am not amiss
that we all love you very much right here

So pay that glass no mind
for you will see in time
Reflected admiration crystal clear


Very cool Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

Jack, I want to save your review to my library! :) Thank you for the lyrical kindness, my friend!