Miracle

A single droplet journeys,

from sky to soil falls

then makes its sacred way

all through the vine

 

The fruit is quenched and sated

baptized by Heaven’s tears ~

the miracle of water

into wine

Author's Note

So many miracles that we never see...

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, all of Mother Nature is miraculous. What a beautiful image you have painted here. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Lydi! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a lovely verse. Your brevity and clarity are appreciated.:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, KL!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Wonderful, lovely write. I can almost taste the lush, refreshing wine, blessed with Heaven's dew. Indeed, there are countless miracles around us, happening each day, that we don't notice. A very great write. This piece made me want a nice, refreshing glass of wine. :D

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for this lovely review, Gleb! Cheers! :)

[Shaun Payton]

I love this piece Rita. Miracles are everywhere. wondrous and endearing. A openimd and heart often see them.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for such kind words, Shaun!

[Shaun Payton]

You are most welcome Rita:)

[Shaun Payton]

Just reading again this gem!

[Troy Henson]

So true and such an untapped area. It's our own life plights that shelters us from the many miracles that occur daily. So many more that we can imagine.

Regards

[Rita L. Sev]

Troy, you are so right - we see the hardships, but not the miracles... Thank you for your insightful review!

[Marie]

That is lovely, and it is a miracle.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Marie :)

[Jack...]

Beautiful Rita and you are so right, there are miracles everyday that hapened without notice.

[Rita L. Sev]

So many miracles... Thank you, Jack.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is downright philosophical... wonderful write, Rita!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Travis. Been wading in deeper waters lately...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

And it shows.

[Pryde Foltz]

baptized by Heaven’s tears ~
the miracle of water
into wine

Life is a miracle at that. Well said.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Pryde!

[Frieda P]

Now that's a miracle I can soak in. Don't mind getting whet in this one. Perfect Rita.

100 overflowing glasses of vino

[Rita L. Sev]

I knew you'd be on board with the wine as the end result! :) Thanks, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Oh you know it, especially after today, may I have some cheese with my whine, I mean wine? ha, my pleasure always Rita! ;-)