Full Moon

Limerick

I’d like to see snow fall in June

Or a swan that is likely to swoon

There are so many sights

That my fancies ignite

Like both kinds of shiny full moon

Reviews

[Ranger Kessel]

Very nice limerick. Thank you for sharing.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Ranger. :)

[Zahra]

hahah nice lovely limerick

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Glad you enjoyed!

[Aehr]

Can't get over how cute this is! Lovely rhyming. Its amazing how cheerful, sweet and happy this is in general. Made my night!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) So glad to give some cheer! Thank you, Rhea!

[Frieda P]

Ha is that the same full moon where rainbows and unicorns hide out? Cute Rita. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! In fact, it is! ;) Thanks, Frieda!

[s y e]

Hahaha, loved this Limerick so much!

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I was just having some fun - thanks, Noodle!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You have a fun imagination indeed, nice limerick

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks, Dale!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha! you made my day ... I'm all a-smile now ..
E.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Big smile at this - Thanks, E!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is pretty cool...reminds me of gwendolyn brooks who wrote many poems from the perspective of very young children...this is simple but at the same time so complex...

ironies of nature and life...snow in june...and yet there are always two sides to that same moon.

we can be in the dark or the light...but always hope our fancies will ignite.

[Rita L. Sev]

So much in life is worth a deeper look, and the very young are the best seekers! Thanks, Jacob!

[Sami Khalil]

Funny, witty and splendidly written...At least the full moon is shinning either way...Bravo...........

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! Thanks, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)................

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, let me tell you, it ain't no fun when snow falls on the 21st of June when you are working outside, nevertheless, a good write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! True - and after the winter we've had, I don't ever want to see the stuff again! Thanks, KL!