Whine Stopper

There’s air in my lungs

My neurons are firing

My heart keeps a-beating,

My eyes still admiring

There’s food in the pantry,

A roof overhead

Got clothes on my back

And I’m happily wed

If there’s ever a day

When I grumble and whine

Remind me of these ~

I’m doing just fine

Reviews

[Ladysue]

oh this is wonderful and should be a daily mantra.. love love the title too!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Ladysue! I have to admit, I had fun with that title! :)

[Beccy]

So true how we sometimes forget to count our blessings.

Enjoyed this fun little reminder that we mostly have it good compared to some.

Beccy.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Beccy! :)

[Jennie Baron]

Inspirational! Despite everything, we still have everyday blessings to be thankful for all the time. And I agree you did approach the subject with a wonderful sense of humor.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Jennie! Glad you enjoyed!

[Jennie Baron]

I did indeed.

[s y e]

You make me smmile and damn woman, you got an attitude and I LOVE it! This was great, your sense of humour is amazing.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, dear Noodle - Laughter and gratitude = Life's greatest attitude! ;p

[Matching Socks]

Can't help but smile. :)
Really fun little poem with big truth, yet some people despite all they have will still feel like they've been shafted. Enjoyed this one a lot. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Ance - yes, I know too many people who complain when they have it pretty well...

[Lydia Shutter]

Love it! With an attitude like that, you will always be a grateful person...one who does not whine about the stupid bumps in the road. Truly, we are all so fortunate....but we often overlook that fact. I enjoyed this one. So upbeat! Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Lydi! I have so many blessings, it would be sinful to complain!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This just adds much inspiration as I read it...
up beat in tempo and phrase...

[Rita L. Sev]

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks, Glen!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Cassie]

Wow!!!! this is the best, true, inspiring poem i have read today, we need to always count our blessings...

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Cassie! I agree, and count you among mine! :)

[A. Amos]

Rita one of your finest work, keep creating your magic!

[Rita L. Sev]

Why, Thank you, A! :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Really love this one. When I was in Puerto Lindo, Panama, I saw first-hand the way other people live and it has really made me appreciate what I've got. Great work!╰☆╮

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Brittany.