Oceans in my eyes...

Oceans in my eyes...

A Poem by Sanjh
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A sad poem full of negative energy...

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What I expected,
and what I've got.
Just some shattered dreams,
and a hell to rot...

 

Looking at the past,
the path I've walked.
The decisions that I made,
and hell yeah, am shocked...

 

I can't mend,
the damage I've done.
I took my chances,
And I could have won...

 

It's not that I didn't try,
It's not that I didn't cry.
The only fault was,
the happiness that I couldn't buy...

 

Now look at me,
What else've i got?
Just some mixed thoughts,
I'll take them to the grave and rot!


 

There's not much left,
No more place for lies.
Don't look at me people,
I'm holding oceans in my eyes...

© 2014 Sanjh


Author's Note

Sanjh
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I can feel so much disappointment and sadness in this piece, very well put together. I would say to this person in the poem to chin up, cheer up, the world is yours too take, never regret because you are still alive, and if you are alive you can still change your situation

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and the advice...:)



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I love this poem, it rhymes well and is well described! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it Lyndy, thanks. :)
This is exactly how I felt two years back... all pain, confusion and disappointment and tjough I myself have written about it and read many more such poems I still find this one close to my heart.all credit goes to the language qnd your informal tone. Amazing job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Penny, we all go through such time at some point in our life. We need to be strong and mov.. read more
Penny

6 Years Ago

I am glad you moved on like me too. My pleasure.
My cup of tea.

My goodness, you've got struggle.

Good job. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jessica, I'm glad you liked it...:)
Its a pure representation of sadness, depression and the feeling of being let down...all that which no one really sees but if possible i would really like to suggest this person to hang in there as there`s nothing permanent in this world.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you...:)
Really really sad and shattered dream that is the mood.your poem is a reflection of feelings. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Once more thank you so much Onyia...:)
The regret and anger can be deeply felt in this piece.. Nicely penned Sanjh! From the past, decisions, mistakes and all. A sad but well written piece.. But everything does change or happen for better, right?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Absolutely Sindu, the bad time passes out and the sun of happiness rises again...
thank you so.. read more
Sindu

6 Years Ago

welcome :)
Yup, definitely both pain and sadness can be felt from this piece. That was well done. :)

I can't say that things will definitely better. The best I can tell you is for you to expect the worst but hope for the best? or idk. I don't really believe that either. Anyway, keep it up! The good work, i mean... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I thing I know what you are trying to say...:)
This is packed with so much sadness. I understood perfectly everything you were trying to say. You connected with the readers. Its sad but so strong and powerful. Another great piece by you :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you once again for the nice words Isha...:)
OMG! Everyone overcomes it.. so will you...
I can actually feel what you are trying to say.. Like, I got goosebumps , no kidding!
my god! Send me more write-ups please!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Past is past,
no one can run.
We can just accept it
and move on,
Maybe tha.. read more
That was very well done, and Keep up this wonderfull work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

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