Bleeding Heart..

This song killed me ..

I got the call ..

My heart pounded a million beats per second when I saw your name on my screen ..

You  haven't called me in a long time ..

My phone even missed your name ..

You weren't okay .. You were down .. Saying that you were really confused and 

tired..

That you need to be away from everyone for  a while ..

My heart's beats were slowing down while I am hearing you say the words ..

I need to disappear .. you said..

I stood there in silence ..

I could feel my heart bleeding ..

My body was paralyzed ..

How much more pain can I handle? You left before , came back ,left me again &

 came back..

And now you want to disappear again ?

My heart couldn't even cry for help .. it kept bleeding non stop ..

I can feel severe pain in my heart while I am writing this..

Everything in my body was broken ..everything inside me is burning ..

Bleeding ..

You are the one that left me like this ..

My heart is burning and turning into ashes..

You left me bleeding , you left me burning , you left me broken ..

And here I am ..

Listening to that sad melody that makes every single part of my body shiver..

Bleed..

Until it can no longer beat for you anymore ..

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

I think it is easier to love the fall than to love another. Sad that you bled out the color of autumn leaves

[Bhumika Devkota]

Such heartbreaking poem. Beautiful. So much feelings and emotions.
I love the part "My heart's beats were slowing down while I am hearing you say the words.. I need to disappear .. you said.. I stood in silence .. I could feel my heart bleeding.. My body paralyzed..''
It has so much emotions and readers know how you feel and some can relate. Great job.
-B.D.

[Sasha]

Thanks for stopping by :)
Appreciate it !

[Tania]

This is beautiful.. It shows truth. It reveals true emotions . We as human beings can become so delicate in relation to our emotions and this feeling of sadness grows within us creating deep hurtful pain which then we learn to adapt too. It is the sad truth of a relationship in which when it breaks one really will get hurt and bleed.

[Sasha]

Indeed ..
Thanks for stopping by:)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such true Raw emotions so Heartbreaking I can feel the sadness
in your words as you speak them BRAVO well done.


I loved this and you about had me in tears nicely penned
My Poetess friend Thank you for sharing this lovely Heartbreaking piece.



I loved these stanza's line here.


You are the one that left me like this ..

My heart is burning and turning into ashes..

You left me bleeding , you left me burning , you left me broken ..

And here I am ..

Listening to that sad melody that makes every single part of my body shiver..

Bleed..

Until it can no longer beat for you anymore ..



Blessings. kindred poet

[Sasha]

Lyrics translation
http://lyricstranslate.com/en/isyan-revolt.html

[Frieda P]

'I need to disappear .. you said.. Ouch, that one hurt, painful read...the music is so apropos even though I have no clue what he's saying, the sentiment shines through as it does in your angsty poem...love hurts!

[Sasha]

Thanks Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Been there, haven't we all....stay strong. :)

[Sasha]

It's the hardest feeling ever..
Trying to stay strong yea..
Thanx hun :)
xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a raw and honest emotion... heartbreaking...

I truly felt your pain... :(

Well penned, Sasha!~xoxo~:)

[Sasha]

Yeah .. :(
Glad you liked it !
Thanks Robbie :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure, Sasha...hang in there, my friend!~xoxo~:)

[Sasha]

I'm trying my best .. Thank you hun :) xoxo